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moonstootired April 8 2011, 15:33:14 UTC
thanks so much. glad you enjoyed it. :)

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ebilchickens April 6 2011, 23:46:16 UTC
I like this. Danny and Steve and how you depict them being together. How that even though they're very different they can usually get each other but how they still sometimes have horrible miscommunications but it works out because they're there for each other.

Also this line made me chuckle “It’s not that difficult, Steve. Visualize the fuckers jumping over a fence and count them.” Grumpy-sleepy Danny should not be as cute as it is, but he so is.

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moonstootired April 8 2011, 15:35:47 UTC
Thank you.

Also,

Grumpy-sleepy Danny should not be as cute as it is, but he so is.

I'm so relieved I'm not the only one with that particular obsession. It's becoming a thing... I can just feel it. :)

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jazzybabe56 April 7 2011, 00:43:24 UTC
I love Steve telling Danny that he is no good with words - thats part of why I love the show so much - Danny fills in the blanks for Steve.....and even tho he is a man of few words, you always know there is something going on inside his head....even if he can't say it...

I love stories of misunderstanding that become big angst vehicles.....

great read! loved it!

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moonstootired April 8 2011, 15:38:56 UTC
As if Danny needed telling. ;)
But also everything you said about Steve? My thoughts exactly. Thank you.

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zortified April 7 2011, 00:59:46 UTC
I really liked this.

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alamo_girl80 April 7 2011, 01:20:41 UTC
So I have this big stupid smile on my face that I'm probably gonna have to explain to my husband soon. Oh well, screw it.

I love that even counting sheep, Steve will find a way to blow something up. And everything Danny is screaming about coming to him slowly, dawning on him how much this man means to him.

I also love that you paralleled all the fear we see in Steve about Danny wanting to leave and mirrored it in Danny being afraid that Steve could go back to his old life at any time.

This is so brilliant. You also gave me a place to kick off my little ficlet idea I've been postponing, so THANK YOU!! Because I too have the big scary fics in the works, but I want to do something short and sweet first.

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moonstootired April 8 2011, 15:42:49 UTC
Thank you, hun. It means a lot.

You also gave me a place to kick off my little ficlet idea I've been postponing, so THANK YOU!! Because I too have the big scary fics in the works, but I want to do something short and sweet first.

Yay! I'm pleased and excited at the same time. Looking forward to it!

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