I'm so loving this and was delighted to see a new instalment, you blend this in so well to the actual episodes and I love your characters. Looking forward to the next chapter when you can :)
Glad you wrote more, I know how RL can get distracting, and Grace, you wrote her perfectly. Steve and Danny are still the same in this 'verse, which can be hard to do in an AU. Looking forward to more, especially now that they have shared a kiss.
Haven't yet read it, only wanted to tell you that I actually started squeeing when I saw you'd posted the second part just now. :D I'm extremely looking forward to reading it (don't have the time right now), and will write a better comment later. :)
Sorry it took me so long to comment, and I have to say I certainly wasn't disappointed. Quite the opposite in fact. :) This is pure brilliance and definitly one of my favourite AU series ever!
I loved to see Steve's POV here, to get his thoughts on Danny and to see the psychic thing through his eyes. And he's just so sweet and squishy and all hung up on Danny! :D It's adorable!
And I really love how you take different canon events and then change them subtly and bring them together to create something awesome. I had a lot of fun noticing the parts from various episodes and then seeing what you did with them. I was like, 'Oh, this is from 4, and this from 3 and this from 17, but he's not using a grenade.' And the kiss was of course perfect.
I'm so, so looking forward to the next part, and I even don't mind waiting for it. Ok, perhaps I do a bit, but that's fine, I know how RL can get. Anyway, thanks for a wonderful story!
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there are moments when I wish I could just quit RL. ;)
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I loved to see Steve's POV here, to get his thoughts on Danny and to see the psychic thing through his eyes. And he's just so sweet and squishy and all hung up on Danny! :D It's adorable!
And I really love how you take different canon events and then change them subtly and bring them together to create something awesome. I had a lot of fun noticing the parts from various episodes and then seeing what you did with them. I was like, 'Oh, this is from 4, and this from 3 and this from 17, but he's not using a grenade.' And the kiss was of course perfect.
I'm so, so looking forward to the next part, and I even don't mind waiting for it. Ok, perhaps I do a bit, but that's fine, I know how RL can get.
Anyway, thanks for a wonderful story!
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