The sparrow grew on me :D Chapter 2

Sep 15, 2012 22:10


Title: Sparrow
Chapter: 2
Prompt: Family
Universe: G1
Rating: PG13
Characters: Prowl/Jazz, Bluestreak, Ratchet, Sideswipe, Wheeljack, Perceptor and mentions of others.
Summary: What does a 3 ton mech see in a newly hatched sparrow?
Disclaimer: I don't own Transformers.
Notes: It was originally supposed to be a one-shot for the Challenge. It grew on me :D ( Read more... )

'verse: sparrow, tranformers g1, prowl, prowl/jazz, challenge, jazz

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bluebirdsoaring September 16 2012, 00:08:23 UTC
Wow, Heartbreaking but I'm thrilled to see more of this story...I hope they learn to share the pain and that Prowl stops running!!

I am glad they are so devoted to each other. The loss of a child can certainly doom many a happy couple! Prowler, let him in!!

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pjlover666 September 16 2012, 16:10:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it! ^^ Yes, that's the unique thing about them - this tragedy seemed to have made them stronger :(

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pxjloverkyoto September 16 2012, 01:55:52 UTC
Oh Primus, I can't stop crying. Really. This is...wow, I don't even have words. *wipes at tears*

It's...amazing how you're capturing another side to these two, I mean, usually people only show the happy or drama-before-happiness side of them. But this? Losing a child...it's sad, yet amazing.

Keep it up, even if it hurts me to read it, I really want to see if Jazz can get Prowl to finally open up, to finally let the REAL healing begin. *hugs and wipes at tears again* Sorry I'm such a cry baby *smiles weakly*

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pjlover666 September 16 2012, 16:11:31 UTC
Lol, thank you! I am beyond relieved that this story touched you so strongly! It makes me feel how all of my hard work is appreciated! ^^ *hugs tight*
Thank you for reading! ^^

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fianna9 September 16 2012, 22:28:50 UTC
Beautifully done. It's interesting to see Jazz as the rational one and Prowl being the one in denial. You showed their affection perfectly, but it is also a fascinating view into how they've coped with their loss. I'm looking forward to more.

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pjlover666 September 20 2012, 17:58:07 UTC
Thank you so much for reading ^^ I'm really glad you are enjoying it :) Hah, yeah, when it comes down to true, deep feelings, Prowl is out of his element :)

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sideslip_tf September 20 2012, 17:31:11 UTC
That is such a difficult situation. You've done well to show how two individuals try to deal with it.

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pjlover666 September 20 2012, 17:59:58 UTC
Thank you very much! ^^ It really is horrible for them both :(

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mmouse15 September 27 2012, 19:02:16 UTC
This is so sad, but Jazz is right. They have to deal with it for the pain to actually go away. I really like how you're handling the situation between them.

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