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Lift me up. Oneshot.

Oct 01, 2012 23:59

Title: Lift me up
Rating: PG13
Universe: Bayverse
Summary: Why do we keep hitting ourselves with a hammer repeatedly? Because it feels so good when we finally stop. Prowl and Jazz couldn't agree more.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Warnings: None
Word count: ~900
AN: One of my few takes from Prowl's POV. He is just so hard for me. Thank you silberstreif ( Read more... )

prowl/jazz, transformers bay-verse, jazz, au, prowl, oneshot, 'verse: lift me up, silberstreif

Comments 19

silberstreif October 2 2012, 09:34:15 UTC

What a dark and wonderful oneshot. You ahve to feel with them, how they love each other and still... Prowl has to send Jazz out on a suicide mission. Just for one information.
But worse is, that even if Jazz survives, his team will not. The team which consists of Jazz's friends. That Jazz can forgive Prowl doing this repeatedly, that Prowl is able to do this, speaks for them both.
And I really hope that Prowl is wrong with his fear that he does stop caring... but I think he'll never stop. Not if he feels this deeply every time.
Yeah... and sometimes no words are enough to say how fucked up the situation really is. No words are enough to give comfort...
I really love this story.

pjlover666 October 3 2012, 15:50:14 UTC

I have you to thank for this! *hugs* If you didn't prompt me to post it... I so need to write more from Prowl's POV to get comfortable writing him.
Prowl is just so...desperate here. And angry. But mostly desperate, because he doesn't know what to do. The info is truly vital and unfortunately, he has to risk Jazz's life for it. And that's the problem - far too often does the situation gets so dire that he has to send Jazz out on such missions. And everything is just so...wrong. All he could do was hold Jazz close and pray that this wont be the last time he does so...
Thank you again, I'm so happy you liked it!

silberstreif October 4 2012, 21:38:10 UTC

You did the same for me with the RecRoom oneshot and my humour. ;)
Yes, 'wrong' probably is the right word for it. No relationship should include something like this. I really like the dark, desperate and angry Prowl you're developing. ^^

pjlover666 October 4 2012, 22:27:33 UTC

You know it - I'm addicted. I don't think I can ever go back to writing Prowl as something 'light' and goody-good. Even in crack fics he will always be the bot with the wonderfully *dry* humor. And Jazz there to help him out with his own *dark* humor ^^ :D

prowl October 3 2012, 02:20:34 UTC

I LOVED that. Wonderful!

pjlover666 October 3 2012, 15:51:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it and thanks for the review! ^^

prowl October 7 2012, 04:27:26 UTC

Welcome!! :D

gilded_orchid October 4 2012, 01:38:04 UTC

It's never an easy job for Prowl, is it?

I love how you show that, while also giving a view of just how dedicated the Ops mechs are; they willingly take these missions, trusting that it's not a waste. Especially when it comes to Jazz; his most valuable and beloved "piece" (though clearly, Jazz is much, much more than a mere piece, of course).

Such a beautifully desperate piece of work this is, but I love it!

pjlover666 October 4 2012, 22:29:37 UTC

No, it's never easy for Prowl. But the poor mech does it without complain. Jazz is so much more to Prowl and every time sending him out there kills Prowl.

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad that you liked it! ^_^