Yey! My first beta'd fic eva!!!

[pjlover666]

Name: This is war

Author: pjlover666

Rating: PG13

Characters: Prowl and Jazz, (briefly Optimus Prime and Ironhide)

Summary: Prowl and Jazz are the best Special Operations team Cybertron has ever seen. Only one problem - they can't stand each other.

Warnings: unnamed deaths, mild swearing

Inspired by http:/yamiyouka.deviantart.com/art/Black-and-Whites-

Comments

[camfield]

This was awesome. I love how you described everything, I do have a thing for claws...

I'd love to see where these two get together, sounds like it would be an all around knock down drag out fight even in the berth!

[pjlover666]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, having claws is so cool =D And the the action in the berth will be just that - action! Hope they don't kill each other in the mean time ^_~

[devlinnreiko]

This was just amazing! I really enjoyed it....the characterization and the way it flowed was lovely.

I really hope that perhaps there is a spin-off or little addition that pops up. LOL

[pjlover666]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write :) And already continuations are forming in my head - plot bunny will multiply it seems :D

[crnkysnapdragon]

Ohhh can we say sexually frustrated??

[pjlover666]

Hah, not yet, but we're getting there ;) XD

[bluebirdsoaring]

Great job!!! Congrats on the beta...it makes your wonderful stories so much easier to read =)

[pjlover666]

*blushes* Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

[gracesolo]

It looks so pretty now that it is posted!! And I did nothing but polish an already awesome story, English is the Pits to learn and the grammar does not take prisoners!!! Is just as lovely now as it was before, and was a joy to beta as well!!

[pjlover666]

Thank you so much! You are an amazing beta! It happened thanks to you! *hugs*