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Honey Love, Bitter Misery I Adam/Blake I Chapter Five: First Impressions - Right and Wrong

Apr 08, 2012 05:13

Title: Honey Love, Bitter Misery

Rating/Warning: R (NC-17 later XD )

Words: 8,493

Paring: Adam/Blake aka Shevine

Contains: Cursing, violence, mentions of slash, slash, MAN SEX...maybe anyway, but much later, depression, ect.

Summary: The spark to set off the hot mess is when Adam is beaten by a past flame; guess who takes him to the hospital? As the ( Read more... )

adam levine, shevine, read bitches, honey love bitter misery, addy, blake shelton, bee - bee

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AWWWWW HELL NO!!!!!! untouched_angel April 8 2012, 14:33:47 UTC

Blake better beat someone's ass!!! Or else I'll do it for him!!!!!!! Great Jon with the chapter and about fucking time!!!! I fucking read it and reviewed! Thank you :)

Re: AWWWWW HELL NO!!!!!! untouched_angel April 8 2012, 14:34:47 UTC

Yes I know I said Jon but I met to put job! I'm on my iPod......stupid autocorrect!!!!!

Re: AWWWWW HELL NO!!!!!! moonwarrior578 April 8 2012, 16:13:54 UTC

Oh course you did. ;p

Re: AWWWWW HELL NO!!!!!! moonwarrior578 April 8 2012, 16:14:51 UTC

He's going to. Trust me there will be smack down. Silas is a slippery bastard though, so it's going to take some time.

I know, THANK YOU FORE REVIEWING!

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bowsie22 April 8 2012, 22:10:57 UTC

I'm so happy you bought in the rest of Maroon 5 and I'm ecstatic that you updated! Silas really creeps me out. Can't wait for more =D

:) moonwarrior578 April 8 2012, 22:22:11 UTC

Well if you e going to have Adam injured, you have to bring in the band. I'm glad you liked it.

Silas is supposed to be creepy, he's suppose to be cold, sarcastic, with a tint of psycho. So I'm glad he fulfilled those expectations.

Honey love amalia21_6 April 15 2012, 01:00:24 UTC

Silas is creepy X 10. I love how you had Blake decribing Adam's words with colors and shapes.

Fantastic.

Re: Honey love moonwarrior578 April 19 2012, 00:39:38 UTC

He is suppose to be. Silas is meant to be cold, sarcastic, with a tint of psycho. Emotionless. I'm glad my vision of him came to life.

I hoped the readers would get the description. I was lying on my back after getting up one morning, looking at the white ceiling and it just came to me. I just though how it would feel to see the more boring color of any palette when someone you cared about was in the bed beside you. After doing a little research on Adam's tats it all just appeared, I'm glad it came out well.

I am go glad you like the chapter and the story so far! Thank you for commenting and I hope that you are pleased where it is going!

saso_saku4ever May 4 2012, 06:34:01 UTC

Oh my god, that was really long; long awaited as well. So, its good it was so long. Got a lot of much needed info about Adam's assailant. And such cute little snippets about Blake and Adam first meeting each other, and Blake is sooo in love with Adam to be 'redecorating' the plain white room with features of Adam. x3 AHHHHH, fucking Silas is right there, Blake please wake up and kill the guy who would even think of hurting Adam! And I like the inclusion of Maroon 5. I'm so glad you finally updated; cant wait for the next chapter. x3

I know I KNOW!! moonwarrior578 May 8 2012, 17:31:01 UTC

But ya see, the reason why you guys put up with me not updating quickly is because I put out long ass chapters when I do actually update. It balances out somehow ( ... )

lilycat81 May 10 2012, 06:05:28 UTC

So marvelous! I can't get enough of their bromance. How can the rest of the world be refraining from indulging in their fandom, I ask you? Your writing hits on all of my weaknesses - the hurt/comfort/rescue bit in particular, also the denial/slow acceptance aspect of it all.

I LOVE it! Thanks so much for writing the fanfic that I desperately longed for. :) I will be here happily awaiting updates whenever they might appear. Cheers!

Thank You!! moonwarrior578 May 16 2012, 18:30:45 UTC

I am so glad you like it. I wasn't sure what words would be used to describe this chapter, but I think marvelous works!

The reason the world refrains from the bromance is because they know they can't handle being part of the fandom! It takes a special kind of fangirl/boy to ship these two.

I'm glad that all the sensitive spots are hit, hopefully not too much, but just enough.

Your longing is fulfilled, to your satisfaction I hope. Thank you so much for your review and I hope that the future chapters will be as delightful as the story so far has been!

Again, thank you for feeding the muse through reviews!