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Honey Love, Bitter Misery l Adam/Blake l Chapter Three: Ownership

Jul 03, 2011 19:41

YESSSSS, IT'S FINALLY HERE!!!!!

Title: Honey Love, Bitter Misery

Rating/Warning: NC-17

Words: 5, 320

Paring: Adam/Blake aka Shevine

Contains: Cursing, violence, mentions of slash, slash, MAN SEX...maybe anyway, but much later, depression, ect.

Summary: The spark to set off the hot mess is when Adam is beaten by a past flame; guess who ( Read more... )

shevine, bee bee, big country, the voice, blake shelton, honey bee, adam levine, adam/blake, love, addy, misery

Comments 36

untouched_angel July 4 2011, 00:01:17 UTC

FUCKING FINALLY!!!!! I've waited too fucking long for this!!!!!!!!!! Since you left it at a cliffee again you know what that means? MORE STALKING! lol. I'm sooo glad you put this up! I'm soo happy that Big Country saved his Addy! :D

You're WELCOME!!!?!!?!?!??!?!!!!! moonwarrior578 July 4 2011, 02:40:07 UTC

You're welcome, I told you I was working on it. The first section took me sooooooo long. Then the rest was easy.

Oh great, more stalking...

I'm glad you like it!!

ANd of course Blake has to save Addy, but Adam will backlash soon. I don't want him to become the pathetic character that can't do anything...

But in all seriousness, if you're not too drunk to answer, how did you like the chapter? Was the stranger parts good? Blake's parts?

Give me some feedback here!!

PLEASSSEEE???

Re: You're WELCOME!!!?!!?!?!??!?!!!!! untouched_angel July 4 2011, 03:46:18 UTC

I think the whole thing was sooo awesome! and I'm not that drunk! My only problem is that Blake didn't get to kick the guys(Bill?Because of the "bll") ass! I wanted Papa Bear to kick some ass! But I can wait till the next chapter..... I just gotta an idea for a fic... bye!

*opens Microsoft Word*

Re: You're WELCOME!!!?!!?!?!??!?!!!!! moonwarrior578 July 4 2011, 03:54:42 UTC

Not Bill, I might have to go change that, but like

"Bl..." The beginning of Blake??

Oh Papa Bear will kick ass, he did a pretty good job on the door though!

Can't wait to read your fic, whatever you have in mind!!

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stellaann July 4 2011, 02:48:01 UTC

So I usually avoid stories like this. I stick to my fluffy shallow smut and I'm usually happy that way but I had to check this story out and I am so glad I did! I love everything. Esecially the deep plot and perspective changes. Great job and i can't wait for more!

THANKS! moonwarrior578 July 4 2011, 02:53:34 UTC

First thing I gotta say is I love your icon! Conner and Murphy...I love them!

I'm so glad you love it, I'm sorry it's not smutty...but I like detailed stuff more.

I was wondering if people would get the perspective changes, because I love when people do that for specific scenes (although it was a pain in the ass to type that Blake/Adam/Stranger scene three times). I love how that part turned out though.

The plot on the other hand was something that just came to me, I'm glad you love it!

I hope to get more out soon!

THANKS FOR READING/COMMENTING!

Gahhh!! anonymous July 9 2011, 16:07:21 UTC

I seriously love you!! This story is awesome, I am so glad you decided to write it and share it with everyone. I love how you make Papa Bear Blake so cute :) but i hope Adam starts to kick so creepy guy butt!! Anyways, thanks!! I loved the story so much you got my first lj comment ever :) Im usually just a lurker.

Re: Gahhh!! moonwarrior578 July 9 2011, 16:36:58 UTC

YAY!

I'm so glad you love it, but DANG! I was your first lj comment ever!?!?!? I feel honored, I didn't think the story was THAT good!

But whatever...

Well I wasn't really going for cute with Blake but I guess that could work; and don't you worry Adam will come out fighting very soon, we just had to set up that the creepy dude is not to be screwed with.

You're a lurker eh? Well so am I, but I'm glad you decided to comment! THANKS!

lovesmyboys July 13 2011, 04:21:07 UTC

Hey, I love your story so much; it kinda inspired me to write the one I've been posting on the Bromance LiveJournal. So, I know when mine is updating (finishing really); when is yours?

So really, thank you so much for the inspiration necessary to actually get on my butt and write for a change!

Also, would you mind horribly if I used your slashy "Honey Bee" in a possible upcoming story? If Blake and Adam cooperate that is...

Ehhhh... moonwarrior578 July 13 2011, 04:38:08 UTC

Frankly I don't have a timeline, even though I should, of when my story will be finished.

I'm so glad that I could help your muses, even though Im not sure how...lol

But I'm so glad you like the story, it makes me feel great that people are enjoying the story as much as I am.

Of course you can use the slashy song, but I'm glad you asked. Although I would have been thrilled either way when I read the fic! ;p

can't wait to read it btw!!

Re: Ehhhh... lovesmyboys July 13 2011, 04:52:56 UTC

Not even sure if there's going to be one at this point, but an idea hit me earlier and I'd like to run with it a little. I'd never have used the song without your permission so, thanks.

If you need someone to talk it out with, I'm an editor by trade; I only created this account to post my story really, so I'm older than I appear (so to speak ;) ). Just so you know, I'm stalking you too...

Re: Ehhhh... moonwarrior578 July 13 2011, 15:14:42 UTC

Great, now I have TWO stalkers (untouched angel has been since the 2nd chapter) ...one of which is an OLDER (lady? It's the profile pic, Idk why I think your a girl) person...GREEEAAATTTT. Not that I mind...;p

I always ask permission too, habit I guess. I hope the O-shot/story will be out soon so I can review it!!

I might just take you up on that offer, of course I couldn't give away the plot too much...

Thread 9

anonymous October 19 2011, 01:02:57 UTC

Please get the next one up I'm sooooooooooooo looking forward to it I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ALRIGHT!!! moonwarrior578 October 19 2011, 02:16:39 UTC

I'm working on it as I type this!! Blake's just being stupid and stubborn....XD