First Post Ever: Naruto

[moonylala]

This is pretty much the first thing I've ever posted here. It was from the Naruto AU meme, and one of the best prompts I think; a reincarnation prompt.
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Naruto wasn’t crazy. He used to be but not now. Now he was fixed. The doctors said so. He thought they might be wrong, because the voice in his head was still there, still

Comments

[syrraki]

Oooh, you know, this is pretty fun! Engaging, and not nauseating like most college fics, ha ha. I was sad it was just a one shot. You COULD do with a beta though, not so much typos as a few spelling mistakes, the types that usually wouldn't be picked up with a spell-check.

Hope to see more from you :D.

I wish you'd write a multichap based on this fic XD

[moonylala]

Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. The story is the first one I’ve put up here, so I was a bit apprehensive about it. As far as the spelling is concerned, I agree, I'm a terrible speller:( Sorry, I hope it wasn't too distracting.
I don't really have more in mind for this fic... Maybe some day!