Second Chance part 4

[moonypads]

“Frank,” whispered a voice.  “Fraaaaaank.”

“G’way,” Severus muttered rolling over.  A slight breeze told him that his curtains had been opened.

“Frankiluussssss!  Sniverank!  Wakey wakey” the voice persisted.  “Lumos!” A bright light penetrated his eyelids.

“Nimue’s tit’s!  Do you…wait did you

Comments

[adelaideviolent]

Whoooo.
This is really getting good.
Man, I can't wait for the next bits.
Goood job.

[moonypads]

Thanks so much!

[forest_rose]

Omg!

Severus opened his mouth to repeat himself but then closed it again. He sat up and fidgeted. “You don’t um…you aren’t too upset are you? I mean, if you need something…”
*melts* Oh, Severus. So adorable!

And poor Remus *sobs* They'll find Sirius soon though, right? Right?

Despite the heartbreak, though, this: “I’d come hug you or something, but you’re naked and you were just wanking.”
made me laugh out loud. Typical James!
I love his bemusement at why anyone would think he didn't like Hallowe'en. They're all so adorable! *squishes*

[moonypads]

Aww thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

[seschat]

Haha, I'm really enjoying this. Write a lot more, please!

[moonypads]

Thank you!

[alatariel_eluch]

This keeps getting better and better. oh, and this "..That’s why last year you and I dressed up as our ‘dad’s’ and spent the day chopping off fake snake heads and yelling “Expelliarmus” at people." made me sporfle my tea all over the place. <3

[moonypads]

Hooray! I just love the mental image of that. Thanks!

[brighty18]

Ooooh, poor Remus/Teddy! The image of him wanking as Sirius is actually very poignant - but also quite hot. Will it be weird for him that Sirius will not look like Sirius, but like... Scorpius? (In which case he'd likely end-up in Slytherin... poor guys!)

I love the conversation in the beginning, too. Those costumes? Brilliant!

And great use of "too soon."

[troublemagnet]

"...In which case he'd likely end-up in Slytherin... poor guys!"

Unless, of course he ended up in Gryffindor! :-) It would be quite fitting and poetic I think.

[brighty18]

Good point. I suppose I just assumed that a Malfoy would end up in Slytherin, but that's just like Sirius, as a Black, ending up in Gryffindor, is it not? And, you know what they say about "to assume..."

[moonypads]

You're making a lot of assumptions actually. Such as "Sirius will be Scorpius" and more importantly, "Sirius said yes".

And you don't want to make an ass out of you and mumptions.