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moonypads

Second Chance Part 6

Aug 12, 2008 03:49

“Hell of a Christmas,” James said, settling back into his chair with a handful of candy. “You two were too nice to me!”

“Of course!” Remus gasped, snapping his fingers. “Frank is trying to kill you with generosity, that’s why he doesn’t hex you!”

“Oh, dear. You’ve seen through my plan, Ted,” Severus said from the floor.
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moonypads August 12 2008, 09:04:52 UTC

You're too fast! Shhh

moonypads August 12 2008, 09:50:28 UTC

Er, sorry you caught that. I originally had the ending you read, and this was going to be part of the next chapter. But I decided after posting it would be better to switch them. But you were already here, grr.

Thanks though! I'm glad you enjoy it!

forest_rose August 12 2008, 12:25:46 UTC

I knew it! I knew Al was someone, and I hoped it was Sirius! Bless those boys, can I take them all home with me?

I love this fic so much, it's so beautifully written, and the characterisation is perfect.

moonypads August 12 2008, 19:35:32 UTC

You can borrow them for a while if you like.

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you like it!

seschat August 12 2008, 13:09:10 UTC

Hah! HAH! Haaaaaaaaaah! I figured it out xD I'm so proud of me now *g* *coughs* No shit.

Anyway. This was awesome. I love Teddy/Remus. HAH AND SIRIUS IS BACK xD Write more! And soon!

moonypads August 12 2008, 19:36:31 UTC

Lol great!

Thanks so much!

rev02a August 12 2008, 13:48:02 UTC

I'm reading, reading, reading.... then: " Albus shrugged. “Wanted to.”"

And I go, Oh, hello Sirius.

Well done. :)

moonypads August 12 2008, 19:36:47 UTC

Hahah, I'm impressed with your speed. Thanks =)

elessae August 12 2008, 14:00:13 UTC

SIRIUS!!!!!!!

*hysterical*

God, I can't seem to be able to leave you coherent comments, can I? This is lovely work, as usual. Very believable dialogue, and so much in character. I still get a little sad though at the thought of the lives the younger generation "forfeited" when the Marauders, plus Snape, were reincarnated.

But too happy right now that Sirius is Albus and they are brothers. Like they should have been. Yay. Poor Harry though - trouble is so coming his way!

moonypads August 12 2008, 19:46:48 UTC

Lol! Thank you so much. Yeah, poor Harry.

Don't be sad for them! They weren't really "forfeited" since it's their souls, they just weren't "complete" yet.