Second Chance Part 7

Aug 14, 2008 04:09

            “Of course I’d say yes!  You think I would have passed this up?” Sirius said.  James wasn’t sure how he was able to find him in the dark, but a hand neatly smacked the back of his head.

“I was hoping you’d be, you know, you,” Sirius said.

“Honestly, it never occurred to me that you, Albus that is, would be you. ( Read more... )

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forest_rose August 14 2008, 10:53:15 UTC
*squees wildly* This is just getting better and better! I was so worried that Sirius was going to stomp off in a huff - and then oh, James, of course he was with him in Azkaban. Oh, those boys *loves*

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moonypads August 15 2008, 04:31:38 UTC
Hooray! Thanks so much! I'm so glad you love them!

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brighty18 August 14 2008, 15:13:55 UTC
This was great! I love, love, LOVE the fact that James was with him in Azkaban! I was thinking of playing with that in future fics, but with Alphard/Oscar, too.

And you did a wonderful job with the conflict between Sirius and Severus. I really appreciated James' speech there and I had one of those "Guh!" moments when Severus used Sirius' first name. In fact, the way that he treated Sirius in general was really fitting for a Snape who had changed. Yes, there was still the sarcasm, but it's now so much more... gentle. It sort-of goes to show you what Snape could have been!

But, oh, I cannot wait for the next part - even though I have a fear that Sirius being Albus will freak out Remus.

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moonypads August 15 2008, 04:32:34 UTC
I'm glad you do! Can't wait to read your take on it!

And I'm so glad you're enjoying the interactions between the silly boys. I love Severus!

Next part soon! You'll have to see!

Thank you so much!

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rev02a August 14 2008, 15:32:34 UTC
I'm with Brighty, Remus is going to flip... but I can't wait to see it. :)

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moonypads August 15 2008, 04:33:19 UTC
Eep! We'll see!

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aquila_star August 14 2008, 15:59:22 UTC
Ooh, lovely. He's so...Sirius! Perfect.

This fic is my addiction right now, I can't wait for more.

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moonypads August 15 2008, 04:33:34 UTC
Aww you have no idea how happy that makes me! Thank you!

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moonypads August 15 2008, 04:33:51 UTC
Thanks so much!

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