Literary Analysis: I noticed some recurring themes, which took away from the mild creativity. I also noticed a few lines that were clever but 25 times more lines of shear spontaneity which resulted in lameness. For the most part, I doubt this had much meaning to it, although there were certain references to your personal life and to opinions on specific types of people, possibly. All in all, this was quiteboring to read considering the horrible grammar and many failed attempts at creativity - I'll give you a C on it, but do better next time. I could of gone about this in a much fancier fashion, but lacked the motivation. And tell this "Kevin Mullan" fellar to change his name!
i know! im so lost in it. the only thing i know how to say is, can i use the bathroom. and thats only because i ask it so many times to get because i have no clue whats going on and i get a headache from it all.
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I noticed some recurring themes, which took away from the mild creativity. I also noticed a few lines that were clever but 25 times more lines of shear spontaneity which resulted in lameness. For the most part, I doubt this had much meaning to it, although there were certain references to your personal life and to opinions on specific types of people, possibly. All in all, this was quiteboring to read considering the horrible grammar and many failed attempts at creativity - I'll give you a C on it, but do better next time. I could of gone about this in a much fancier fashion, but lacked the motivation. And tell this "Kevin Mullan" fellar to change his name!
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it is hard :'[
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the only thing i know how to say is, can i use the bathroom.
and thats only because i ask it so many times to get because i have no clue whats going on and i get a headache from it all.
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