Sometimes

[mopinmaudlin]

Sometimes I let the day go by
Sometimes I watch it go away
Sometimes I feel like I'm out of line
What a waste of a life today

Sometimes I get to thinking that
I'm better off not here
Sometimes I think tomorrow
I should just disappear

Comments

[lostsoulgirl]

that is a great poem!!!

thanks

[mopinmaudlin]

I just threw it together cuz I felt like posting something. it's a work in progress, I guess. but thanks for the feedback.

[godengodin]

I have to agree, that's a very good poem - wish I could 'throw things together' like that. ;)

If that's the way you're feeling, I hope it gets better...

[godengodin]

Oh, and by the way, you should post more - where's the 'experiment' otherwise? :) I for one don't bite (well, I do, but only gently... (and not you ;)))

Just from your poem you seem to have a natural writing ability. :) Doesn't it want to burst free?

[mopinmaudlin]

why thank you. It was how I was feeling at the time, but am not feeling so distraught. I have been so busy working, I haven't been able to write anything new. But I'm looking to change jobs soon, so hopefully that will give me more time (these 60+ hour weeks really suck).