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morago

+ Broken Korean (And Fixed Again) [2PM]

Jun 18, 2010 23:40

Title: Broken Korean (And Fixed Again)
Rating: PG-13 (swearing)
Characters: Jay, Taecyeon. Minor Junho.
Word Count: ~5200
Notes: AU fic, set around the time of teenage-angst-ridden, MySpace Jay. Also, this would be riddled with too-long sentences, commas, and the misuse of the word 'lay' if not for my amazing beta, princess_dexter. ♥
Summary: So, Jay ( Read more... )

character; jaebum, pairing; jay/taecyeon, character; junho, character; taecyeon, rating; pg-13, fandom; 2pm

Comments 48

biases June 18 2010, 14:23:49 UTC

I love you and your writing, you know that, right? ♥

The whole fic was just as satisfying this time as it was the first time I read it, and I'm in awe of how you managed to make me feel all these different things. You had me amused at the beginning, interested in their developing relationship, touched by Junho's concern, sniffly when everything seemed to be falling apart, and warm and fuzzy at the end, when it's clear they're bros for lyfe. The characterisation was awesome; I love your bristly Jay, so easily riled, and your easygoing Taec, who wants to be bright, and the camaraderie between them, that deep, comfortable friendship, is so apparent here, even in an AU ( ... )

morago June 30 2010, 13:38:14 UTC

OH YOU. YOU ARE FAR TOO GOOD TO ME.

I AM JUST GLAD MY EMOTIONAL MANIPULATION WORKED ON YOU. ♥

YOU KNOW THIS IS ONLY AS GOOD AS IT IS BECAUSE OF YOU, RIGHT? And even moreso than that, you are my ROCK. Thanks for putting up with my innumerable insecurities and cheering me on. ILU.

SHALL WE HAVE THIS ARGUMENT AGAIN? ♥ ♥ ♥

organicsangchu June 18 2010, 14:40:57 UTC

AH! So cute! <3 I love Taec & Jay's relationship here! (I was hoping something more romantic would have happened, but it's ok :D)
By the way, are you a TaecJay fan?

morago June 30 2010, 13:39:48 UTC

Thanks so much for reading! I'm sorry you were disappointed about the lack of romance, but thanks so much for commenting anyway.

Hmm... what gave you that idea? I tried to be so subtle and all... :D

lettherebeminho June 18 2010, 15:48:03 UTC

aww this was awesome! i really really liked how you wrote jay.
:)

a very enjoyable read. <3

morago June 30 2010, 13:40:38 UTC

Oh, thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Jay is a lot of fun.

Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

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morago June 30 2010, 13:50:26 UTC

Thank you so much! Jay is fantastic, and I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed this. ;D

Thanks a lot for the comment! ♥

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morago June 30 2010, 13:51:43 UTC

Ahaha, I'm so glad to see someone else enjoys my sense of humour!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!