+ Without Breath [Beast]

[morago]

Title: Without Breath
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Junhyung/Doojoon, Yoseob
Word Count: ~7400
Notes: For nautisch for b2stsanta. AU heavily based on the Soom MV. Thanks to biases for all the support every step of the way. Originally posted here.
Summary: Junhyung's stomach clenches tight and the feeling rises to his chest, gripping onto all of his organs and it's the

Comments

[b2stlytriplelf]

Just WOW!!! The plot, your way of writing, your story is so amazing. The part where in Yoseob is in the verge of dying and Junhyung can't hardly breathe, I find myself holding my breath too. I love the way you portray the difference of Junhyung's love to Doojoon and to Yoseob. I love the ending, I'm kinda imagining Kikwang and Hyunseung jumping around in the rain. Brings hope even when everything's so down. Job well done!

[morago]

I am responding so horribly late to your comment, I'm so sorry! Particularly after you took the time to write such an amazing comment. Thank you so much!

Exploring Junhyung's different relationships and trying to balance that with the plot and emotion was something that was really interesting and challenging, so hearing you say you enjoyed it is wonderful. Thank you again, so much. ♥

[akinoyui]

I read this eventhough I was suppose to go to bed because I just couldn't stop reading!Saying that I love this would be an understatement. I'm definitely keeping this. I wanna read it again!
Sentence structures, the way you describe and the flow of the story / words are just lovely. SImply beautiful. I really admire your work :p
Truly amazing! Sorry, I can't get enough of this fic.. I love Doojoon / Junhyung / Yoseob relationship

[morago]

Gah, I hope reading this never caused you any negative effects! Thank you so much for taking that time to read and comment, the idea that you might ever want to read it again is amazing, as is the entirety of your comment. I just... thank you. ♥

I just want to apologise for taking for taking so long to respond to your comment. I'm trying to improve on that! :)

[r_hr_maniac]

7 comments. What is this fuckery.

I love this so, so much. I have a weakness for these post-apocalyptic kinds of stories and you've made it so very interesting. And...and...damn, I wish I wasn't writing this comment at 2am, I would be more coherent if that wasn't the case. Just know that I thoroughly enjoyed this and I'm memming it ♥

[morago]

Argh, I am responding so late to your comment! I'm so sorry!

Thank you so much, though. I've always wanted to write a post-apocalyptic type fic, and the Soom MV just provides a fantastic background for anything of that kind. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it enough to mem it. ♥

[biases]

I seem to always come to your fics late and then I'm never sure what to say, because I adore your stories so much and I don't know what to highlight that I haven't already said in the betaing process.

But first up, I have to say this again - the concept. The concept. I love how you took the brief snippets of the world they gave us in the MV and then built this fic around that, giving it backstory and scope and - excuse the pun - breathing life into it. I remember you telling me your idea and thinking wow, I wonder how she'll do it and then I read it and you succeeded so brilliantly and I am so proud of you for carrying this idea through to the end

[morago]

WHY DO YOU DO THIS, YOU ALWAYS POST EXTRA COMMENTS ON MY FICS POST-BETA AND I NEVER DO FOR YOU ANDI TAKE A ZILLION YEARS TO RESPOND AND I REALLY AM A HORRIBLE PERSON WHO DOESN'T DESERVE YOU. ;____

[biases]

actually I meant to use this icon.

[morago]

Naaaaaaaa duh. ;DDD