[fic] Of Headaches and Annoying Bastards

Feb 06, 2007 22:12

Of Headaches and Annoying Bastards

Rating: T for language and suggested sexual activity
Summary: Naruto’s in a hurry, but Sasuke is not that willing to let him go yet.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. Kishimoto, however, does.
Word Count: 3554
Feedback: All criticism accepted.

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naruto, fic, sasuke/naruto

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calambmity February 6 2007, 21:31:58 UTC
Mya! This was an awesome fic. I love Naruto's P.O.V.
He's hilarious, mature, horny, responsible, irresponsible, considerate, adorable, sexy, and fun.
Great job. I absolutely loved it. Seeing Sasuke like that was interesting and I liked what you said about his obsessions, because well...he IS obsessed with one thing or another. XDDD
The last paragraph sums it up completely.
Sasuke is so needy, but hey Naruto can fit the bill eh? =3
I like your style and I enjoyed reading your fic.
Thank you so much for sharing.

♥ calambmity

P.S. Hope to see more of your work in the future. ^-^

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morbid_musings February 7 2007, 09:09:50 UTC
Thanks for the long feedback! Glad you liked.

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morbid_musings February 7 2007, 10:29:02 UTC
Thanks. Getting into Naruto's head was fun and a nice change from the usual characters I write about.

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an_icey_flame February 6 2007, 22:26:04 UTC
I'm glad I could be of service! ^^ You should definitely write more for this fandom, and I would definitely beta for you again. ♥!

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morbid_musings February 7 2007, 10:36:00 UTC
I am willing to write more for the fandom. The series is too awesome to be just a fleeting fancy.

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shini_chii February 6 2007, 22:26:15 UTC
So beautiful! A little angst, funny things, and a needy Sasuke.

And Naruto's POV, something I always like (when it's IC, like in this fic)

"I swear that if I had known that he’d be like this when we were children, I would never have tried to attract his attention." that sounded so like Naruto, it made me giggle.

A great fic, really ^___^. And that last part, about Naruto being like Kakashi? Brilliant.

And I LOVE your avatar. Sorry, had to say it.

*mems*

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morbid_musings February 7 2007, 10:31:56 UTC
Thanks for reading. I like your avatar, too.

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deeperifall February 7 2007, 07:29:58 UTC
you are awsome i loved the way you wote your story very sumesing loves every bit of it and i wshs i would of think of that way to write mine i woild have less of head ack while doing it....... if there's a chapter two or some of spin off plz sheare it with us aging i love your story. i look fotword to more of your awsome work

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morbid_musings February 7 2007, 10:37:24 UTC
Thanks for reading. I am definitely willing to share more!

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deeperifall February 7 2007, 20:50:59 UTC
your welcome ^^ *sorry for the bad spelling*

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