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morbid_soup

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Oct 06, 2005 21:09

The flame forked into the sky, reaching for the heavens. Reflecting in my eyes. I am it, it is I. We both reach for the heavens. We both never come close. And we die when we lose our fuel.

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emilyrose3292 October 7 2005, 01:32:59 UTC

well, I don't know what that is, but whatever it is, I like it. Massively. 'Tis beautiful.

jeweleddragon October 7 2005, 02:04:25 UTC

Oh yeah and friend me. NOW, dammit.

misao7 October 7 2005, 20:23:27 UTC

Oooo, yay! A John drabble! W0000t!

But shouldn't the first two sentences be linked by a comma?

... morbid_soup October 9 2005, 00:14:37 UTC

Believe it or not, I just sat down and deside to write something on the spot... I tried to make ti a drabble, but it just wouldnt work... It sounds sortuv funky to me...

Re: ... emilyrose3292 October 9 2005, 06:57:11 UTC

WEll, writing something on the spot works well for you, I guess.

aurelias_roses October 9 2005, 00:46:06 UTC

who cares about grammar?!
(in other words, have you seen any of my drabbles? They're full of fragments. Compared to it, John's grammar is genius.)

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aurelias_roses October 7 2005, 20:24:24 UTC

*loves*
Will you actually make it a drabble? Please? *puppydog eyes* it sounds like a concluding setence.

emilyrose3292 October 7 2005, 21:08:17 UTC

*stares* you actually know how to make puppy dog eyes????

aurelias_roses October 7 2005, 21:11:41 UTC

Er...not very well.

martini2010 October 8 2005, 00:58:51 UTC

*also loves*