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mordentlore

Familial Etiquette

Apr 11, 2010 17:46

Title: Familial Etiquette

Rating: G

Fandom: Historical Fiction [Wars of the Roses]

Pairing(s): None

Summary: Edward and Edmund meet their younger siblings for the first time.

Genre: Fluff?

Warnings: Nada (!!)

Notes: [638 words]

( I blacked out and next thing I knew this was here~ )

familial etiquette, historical fiction

Comments 36

overstreets April 11 2010, 19:43:48 UTC

Hahaha Dickon DID touch the ground first since he fell! Cuteness.

mordentlore April 11 2010, 19:48:38 UTC

Did you like it then? :D
I like to think that because Dickon was tiny and undersized and sickly that he had a lovely personality, in between his MURDEROUS RAGES.

overstreets April 11 2010, 19:57:08 UTC

I did like it! Only one thing confused me, that was your use of euphemisms. Like you first introduced Dickon as a tiny figure and called him the smallest Plantagenet - which works perfectly fine - but then later you refer to George as a smaller boy too instead of saying his name, and it look me a moment to get that straight... I started mixing George and Dickon up because they were both referred to as little ickle peoples. It'll take me a bit to get everyone's names and roles straight!

I like Dickon's fiery attitude :D

mordentlore April 11 2010, 20:00:09 UTC

I guess that might have been my subconscious intention, because Edward hasn't the faintest clue who they are, he's never met them, they're just little midgets to him! XD

According to lore, when Dickon was older, and king, he stormed into council and declared that Edward's wife was trying to bewitch him and had withered his arm. I don't know what that has to do with anything - fiery attitude!

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mordentlore April 12 2010, 21:59:05 UTC

DO YOU LIKE IIIIIIIIT? XDDD

And you know you love me ~influencing you~. My obsessions keep things interesting!