With due apologies and respect to the proper parties....

[mordru]

Open: A shop in Gotham City near closing time

Comments

[roguederek]

I didn't realize they spoke British English in Gotham. I take it someones been watching Monty Python recently. ;-)

"'Ello, Mister BATMAN! I've got a nice set of batarangs for you if you wake up now!"

My favourite line. Made me chuckle.

[mordru]

thanks

[mordru]

my favorite line, if I do say so myself is.....
He's shuffled off his mortal cowl and run down the curtain and joined the bleedin' choir invisibile!! THIS IS AN EX-BATMAN!! “

[sedyah]

Hahaha... Actually that was what I was about to type as my favorite line, but I thought you were going to say I was lame ;_;

[sedyah]

Hehehe, definitely worth a chuckle. :)

I am not great at critiquing, so am just going to say.. jolly good job yo ;)

*Snugs*

[sapphireembers]

LOL nicely written, we both enjoyed reading it and got a good laugh at the end. Keep up the good work!