LJ Idol - Write Off

[morettaallstar]

This is an entry for the therealljidol's Write Off. If you'd like to read any of the other entries added and vote for any of them, you can do so here. Voting will only be live until 2am UK time.

She looked like she had washed up on the shore, seaweed clinging to an ankle, shells in her tangled hair.
He found her drying out in the sun, naked, and promptly

Comments

[tonithegreat]

Oh, I love them as BFFs! But it could be cute as a love story, too. I like the creativity of a lot of your details here, and especially the use of signs. If only that had occurred for some other iterations of this tale! I enjoyed this very much!

[morettaallstar]

Yay, thank you! :D

[flipflop_diva]

This is cute! I had a Little Mermaid vibe from the very beginning, but I love the twist you put on it, and I'd love to see more!

[morettaallstar]

Woo, thank you! :) I may continue it eventually...