LJ Idol - Week 10: Take a hike!

[morettaallstar]

This is an entry for the

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[halfshellvenus]

This is intense-- I can see why it was mistaken for non-fiction.

The narrator here is just lucky that her Dad finally saw what was happening under his nose, and decided to do something about it. Too may people insist on being blind to the truth, or decide that they would rather have their new girlfriend/boyfriend than worry about the welfare of their child.

[morettaallstar]

It's a terrible situation to be in, especially when the parent in question won't or can't see what is happening.

Intense in a good way, I hope!

[dmousey]

This was a really cool piece. Unfortunately it almost never turns out that way. ;)
Women like Paulina, who use their body and their beauty to get what they want, usually have stronger self preservation instincts. Your heroine got lucky pushing her beyond control.

This was well done. Hugs and peace~~~

[morettaallstar]

Thanks for the kind words.
Yeah, the main character is lucky her dad was open eyed enough to see it!

[my_name_is_jenn]

Whew, I'm glad this is fiction.

I can remember some of the awful people my parents dated after they split. I think neither one of them really knew how to be alone, so they just dated anyone and everyone.