LJ Idol 11, Week 1: Resolution

[morettaallstar]

Because apparently I can’t write happy things :D

It was a Monday, he decided. Monday the first of the month. That's what he wrote down.

Comments

[m_malcontent]

Very strong and conveys the power of creeping madness.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you!

[murielle]

Such a compelling character! Heartbreaking decent into madness. Very well done! So good to see you back!

[morettaallstar]

Good to be back! It's weird to flex the old writing msucles. Glad to see you here!

[rayaso]

This was a wonderful presentation of thoughts in a mentally ill person's head. He wants to go outside, but at the end, his fear keeps him trapped inside. The sequence of thoughts was fantastic.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you, rayaso!

[tijuanagringo]

Frighteningly believable. I love a good cup of tea, and sometimes just sit inside, gazing out the window, when part of me knows I should go out a take a walk. But I haven't covered the windows yet.

[morettaallstar]

We'll all have to take that deep breath and go out together, knowing the idol community is behind us, and there for us when we get home!

[ellison]

Oh wow. Well done.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you!