Between the Lines - part 2

[morgan72uk]

Comments

[cassi0pei4]

Still loving this. You're dialogue seems so in character that if I try really hard I can almost hear their voices. :)

sidenote: when you wrote: "Chivalry was clearly in this part of the organisation" I think you forgot the word "dead" because, otherwise, I'm at a loss as to what you meant with that sentence

[morgan72uk]

Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now with the missing words added.

[meridian_rose]

The Dominic/Adelle/Topher exchange was wonderful. Poor Ivy, caught in the middle; Dom's wry thoughts about Topher's (lack of) chivalry; how Adelle suggested Topher might just as easily be replaced by an imprint as Dominic could be.

[morgan72uk]

Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting.