New fic: Restoration

[morgan72uk]

Thanks to Rogoblue for her help and advice. 

Comments

[rogoblue]

You decided how to end it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!

I like it. A lot. Because ... drum roll please... it's perfectly balanced at the end. I love balance!

Apologize for excessive use of exclamation points and I'm really glad that we discovered what Dominic was afraid of--pleased that didn't end up on the cutting room floor.

[morgan72uk]

Thanks - I couldn't have done it without your advice and that balance was exactly what I was hoping for. So glad that comes across.

[rogoblue]

Sure you could've, but that was nice of you to say. They both reached out. They both made a mistake. He's afraid. She's creating distance. Then they'll both have to venture something.

Really liked the end.

[marzipanilla]

Ooh.. post-post-apocalypse 'fic! So awesome, not enough of them are out there. How exactly one goes about rebuilding the world is certainly interesting..

I like Adelle reticence to stepping into power, I can definitely see her not wanting to go back into such a role after her hand in it all.

Wonderful Dom perspective.

[morgan72uk]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it. It's great that you think the Dominic I wrote works

[lalenapeike]

This is really lovely.

I love them moving back toward trusting each other slowly and that the connection in their relationship is still there after all that time and bitterness.

Really nicely written for both of them.

[morgan72uk]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thought the characterisation was right. Thanks for commenting.

[darling_ashes]

This was fantastic!

I love post-pulse stories but there are so few of them. But I have to say that this one is definitely my favourite. I love how you painted the Dom-Adelle relationship as being different due to circumstance but still inherently the same at its core (built on re-gained trust).

[morgan72uk]

Thanks for commenting - really glad you enjoyed it and think the writing of their relationship works.