Hadley's i feel will be more disturbed by this experience than the slaves. He's no longer insulated from the callousness of man by the palace. What is Brookings problem with Hadley? .......did he want Hadley's job or something?? I am looking forward to that training/personal session between Cam and Hadley when they can take the scene to the level where pleasure transcends pain - with these too it will no doubt be powerful, intense but beautiful, forging a deeper connection that will scare the shit out of poor Hadley!!
God my heart aches for Mia and Cam, They don't deserve to be treated so badly. You think that Lady Barkley would be to jealous to let Mia get hurt, but at the same time I believe that they would both her and her d***head husband would enjoy it.
I adore the scene you've set here. Poor Mia and Cameron, to be displayed like this, and then to not even be allowed the time to properly recover. The hint of a future scene between Hadley and Cameron sounds delicious.
I'm also really interested in that Lord Orland's reactions weren't shown. I can't quite decide if it's because he's hidden, because Hadley's attention is (rightly) more focused on his slaves, or if it's simply because the demonstration involved Mia and Cameron rather than Daniel.
Brookings is such an interesting character. I really want to know what's happening with him too. You're such an awesome writer.
Thank you for your kind words, sweetheart, I am quite humbled by them. Managing this many character interactions is tricky because it is strictly from Hadley's POV, and all will be revealed as it is revealed to Hadley. :)
<3 I'm humbled by your writing! You deserve all the lovely comments in the world.
And, of course, in your awesomeness you've written a whole new chapter in the time it's taken me to reply to a comment. *dies* But you're grand. I hope you know that. :)
Basically, everything I'm thinking here is an echo of others' comments. I feel for poor Cameron and Mia, being forced to present themselves while still recovering from the scene. I'm wondering how Hadley is going to deal with everything later. I'm still incredibly curious about the mystery. I'm wondering what will happen with Daniel, if perhaps Lord Orland will have fun with him. And I really would love to know why Brookings is such an uptight jerk, and why he dislikes Hadley so.
The rest of the party scene and aftermath is now posted. :) As far as Brookings goes, from Hadley's POV he's just a pain in the ass. Brookings has revealed the why of it as of yet.
I just want Hadley to pack up all the slaves (with the possible exception of Lisbeth) and leave. Just go and find a place and really train and own them, the way they should be trained and owned. Barring that, could we have Lord and Lady Barkley trained? *g*
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I am looking forward to that training/personal session between Cam and Hadley when they can take the scene to the level where pleasure transcends pain - with these too it will no doubt be powerful, intense but beautiful, forging a deeper connection that will scare the shit out of poor Hadley!!
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I'm also really interested in that Lord Orland's reactions weren't shown. I can't quite decide if it's because he's hidden, because Hadley's attention is (rightly) more focused on his slaves, or if it's simply because the demonstration involved Mia and Cameron rather than Daniel.
Brookings is such an interesting character. I really want to know what's happening with him too. You're such an awesome writer.
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And, of course, in your awesomeness you've written a whole new chapter in the time it's taken me to reply to a comment. *dies* But you're grand. I hope you know that. :)
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Barring that, could we have Lord and Lady Barkley trained? *g*
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