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fic: storm born - chapter forty-two

Jan 05, 2011 19:30

Title: Storm Born
Author: Morgen
Summary: It was supposed to be their one chance to be together. Instead it plunged them straight into a nightmare.
Disclaimer: I don't own LOTS or profit from it in any way. Just ( Read more... )

fanfic, storm born, legend of the seeker

Comments 35

reinaborg January 6 2011, 03:15:18 UTC

The fraking poison that fraking Isobel gave her to avoid aging in the underworld...

After reading how you portrait the birth, squatting to make it easier and more natural I imagined that you were going to make R feed the girl even with K unconscious, not only because of how painful the swollen breast could be, but also because is always better for a bb to feed from it mother milk than other.
One of the thinks that I love from your writing is how much you take of the details.

Sad for R, he is desperate to have K back.

Please update soon :P

reinaborg January 6 2011, 14:22:31 UTC

One of the thinks that I love from your writing is how much you take CARE of the details.

:p

morgenwrites January 8 2011, 16:08:16 UTC

Yesss, that mean Isobel did lots to hurt poor K.

And yeah, I always wanted to have K get to feed her baby, even if she is unconscious. It's best for her and her child, especially since it's the only connection they can have at this point.

TY so much for reading and for the feedback! :)

pickgems January 6 2011, 03:37:06 UTC

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morgenwrites January 6 2011, 03:54:25 UTC

<333 WEE BBS.

foreverrk January 6 2011, 04:22:25 UTC

OMG NOOO KK IS DYING HOW SAW BAWWWWW..THIS CHAPTER MADE ME SAD VERY ( ... )

morgenwrites January 8 2011, 16:12:38 UTC

YES THIS IS POSSIBLY A CHAPTER OF MUCH SAD TIMES FOR R AND K. BAWWW HE IS WANTING HER TO WAKE UP AND HOLD THEIR WEE BB LOTS AND LOTS.

Awww, I'm so glad you love the part with R holding his little daughter! He is very sweet with the babies, especially his own.

BUT POOR R FEELS LIKE HE IS A FAIL WITH THE BABIES. IT IS VERY SADTIMES FOR HIM.

YES HE IS TRYING TO TALK TO K LOTS AND LOTS SO SHE WILL BE RETURNING TO HIM.

Heee. I LOOOOVE long posts, no worries!!! TY so much for reading and commenting. :D

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morgenwrites January 8 2011, 16:15:02 UTC

Bawwww, yes. It is maybe a sad chapter.

It is a very sad time for her to be dying. OH NOES, DON'T CRY!!! THERE IS AT LEAST A WEE BB FOR R TO HOLD.

I PROMISE I AM ALWAYS FIXING THINGS IN THE END.

Thank you for reading!!! :D

chickinwhite January 6 2011, 07:30:26 UTC

Ok, I see... The lovely "living-happily-ever-after"-version would have been too easy for you...
And, I have to admit: I so appreciate that! Cause it leads toa few more chapter(s??) and tugs a little more at our heart strings... :) YAY!!
I mean, I love that "living-happily-ever-after"-thing! ...just not too soon *grins* and I love angst on the whole way to it...
- and you´re doing a damned good job with it!
Now waiting for the next... patiently.... hmm, ALMOST patiently...

morgenwrites January 8 2011, 16:20:04 UTC

Heee. Yes, the happily ever after version is always too easy. Must have more angst. I'm glad you don't mind though!

Thank you so much for the feedback! :D