Seeing as this is a morixharuhi community...

Feb 09, 2008 20:05

I've decided to post a few chapters of my series of oneshots called "Brighter than Sunshine" Please feel free to review. ^_^. Hope you enjoy them.

Haruhi sighed as she watched the Hitachiin twins picked a fight with Tamaki-senpai…yet again. This time they were throwing the day-old cakes at Tamaki from behind one of the sofas in the Music Room. ( Read more... )

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purplebloom500 February 10 2008, 15:21:52 UTC
I never thought of making Haruhi a customer. That's GENIUS!

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jenriv89 February 10 2008, 22:39:38 UTC
Glad you liked it. It's one of my better ideas.

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sylph_on_fire February 15 2008, 01:21:38 UTC
Thanks. Really. You just made me fangirl scream. Nicely done!

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xtatriana February 16 2008, 07:55:00 UTC
I feel disappointed in myself, lol. I asked where I could find your stories, and when I go to search I find one directly above my own post. :P

So cute. I remember reading some of your Brighter than Sunshine oneshots on FF.Net.
Eleven was sad, but Twelve was so sweet and made up for it with his cute mind-ramblings. Ooh, and poor Haruhi in Thirteen, that must've been so nerve wracking. even for her. xD
I love Shakespeare, and this chapter was just too cute and gave me that warm fuzzy feeling.

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jenriv89 February 17 2008, 07:29:01 UTC
I have to say...i'm surprised you didn't mention Four. But thank you for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed them. ^_^. And Shakespeare was a genius. I wish I was as genius as him.

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xtatriana February 17 2008, 07:50:34 UTC
Well chapter four was deeeefinitely one that stuck out, for obvious reasons... I'm not sure why I didn't bring it up. I suppose it's because I like to dwell on the positives so simply mentioned others. That's my excuse, anyways. xD

I really like that blurb you placed at the bottom, too. Most people type issues like that for kicks and views, but you put the most important part there for all to see.
For that, I give you kudos. =D

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jenriv89 February 17 2008, 07:52:53 UTC
Yeah. I dunno. Sometimes it really bothers me when people write about that stuff for shits and giggles. I mean, yes, it makes for an awesome yaoi...but really people shouldn't make so much light of it.

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