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Jul 07, 2006 15:05

Anyone who is reading this, please go here and tell me if this article makes sense. Please? You see, I just completely rewrote the article and need to make sure that the new one makes sense to you people who don't have hemangiomas.

If you have any comments, please, please, please write them here so that I can make the article more clear.

Thanks!

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whyless August 12 2006, 04:45:47 UTC
It sounds good.

"Perhaps the most serious complication, however, is the psychosocial damage caused by the overreaction of poorly informed peers."

That part, though, is strongly Chrissie-flavoured. I understand why you put it in, but do you have research to back that up, etc.? If it's based purely on your personal experience, then it probably doesn't belong in an encyclopedia, especially saying "the most serious complication," since that's a value judgement. If you think it's important that people know hemangiomas can cause psychosocial damage, then by all means include that but in a less opinion-centered way.

♥ I hope you are not suffering.

/lateness

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morlomiel August 12 2006, 11:20:22 UTC
It actually *is* backed up! But thank you for the comment, and I will change it to make it more reasonable.

:D

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