FICLET: Peanuts or Pretzels [Jaejoong/Yoochun]

[mormorando]

peanuts or pretzels
jaejoong/yoochun; 450
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written on plane ride from sunny LA to snowy mpls with a crying baby 2 seats down. unbetaed!

Comments

[jedi_baby]

this was sooooo cute/pretty. i loved it. =]

[danbi]

Later, Yoochun always takes care to write them down before the ink rubs off, piecing together and filling in the blanks of Kim Jaejoong slowly.

That's so sweet. ♥ I'm glad you wrote this out and shared it.

[riofrio]

But somehow, he understands that even those tiny one-liners are more than what most receive, so he keeps his complaints to himself and appreciates what's trusted to him.

SOULMATES~!♥ i can just imagine the whole thing and can't help but wish i had one like Jaejoong or Yoochun.. mostly wishing for Yoochun though. just lovely~!

[kyaa_kawaii]

Oh. It's beautiful and ♥

[oldwillow_brook]

I've alway been impressed with your characterization. You've written what? 450 words and I'm absolutely stunned at the fact that you can just write Yoochun like you're istting next to him on the plane. Like you're Yoochun who takes down those memories because Jaejoong means the world and more to you.

It's this back and forth relationship where Jaejoong needs Yoochun and Yoochun needs Jaejoong. It's a two way street, where they make each other feel better and whole at the same time.

This was gorgeous. ♥

[mormorando]

Oh my gosh, I don't even know what to say. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! ♥ Honestly, I just really like Jaechun haha, but I'm reallyreallyreallysuper happy that you like it so much. :))) Seriously, thank you, my face has a huge :D right now.