FIC: A Story For The Grandkids [Jaejoong/Yunho]

Aug 09, 2010 02:54

a story for the grandkids
jaejoong/yunho; 2,843
PG (with some pottymouthing courtesy of kim jaejoong)
help_haiti fic for ksha2222 who gave me a fluffy jaeho prompt. i hope i did it justice!

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pairing: jaejoong/yunho, fandom: dbsk

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underthepines August 9 2010, 19:13:23 UTC
This... This was just what I needed right now, actually^^ This is just so happy and funny and fluffy and wonderful. I love that it's taking place after they're all back together and that YunJae, despite being the oldest, are still delightfully stupid kids. The JaeSu and JaeMin interactions were also fantastic. <333
I lol'd irl multiple times, but I think my favorite line was:

"Anyway, I didn't believe him at first, then I started noticing you always staring creepily at me--"
"--I'm not creepy--"

Oh, Jaejoong and his not-so-secret social awkwardness...

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mormorando August 10 2010, 00:01:07 UTC
Ahh Jaejoong, your creepiness is what makes you endearing. One day you will learn. Thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it. :)))

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yunjae_sarang August 9 2010, 19:49:11 UTC
this was so incredibly cute!!!... and humorous XDDD
i chuckled when i read Junsu grumbling about Yunho's demands and when Jae was pushed into Yunho's room by Yoosumin!
the ending was perfect! Yoochun <3<3<3

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mormorando August 10 2010, 00:02:40 UTC
I think frustrated Junsu would be adorable. :D Thank you!

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doovlynsidhe August 9 2010, 20:03:23 UTC
Oh goodness, this was too adorable! ♥

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mormorando August 10 2010, 00:02:58 UTC
Glad you liked it! :)

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kallistei August 9 2010, 21:27:43 UTC
So... that was pretty cute :|

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mormorando August 10 2010, 00:03:54 UTC
Dumb!Jae is usually that. Useless too, but cute is better. :]

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alicachen August 9 2010, 23:03:57 UTC
Me, like this soooooo much...
Write more YunJae, please...
Thanks for the hard work!

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mormorando August 10 2010, 00:04:18 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

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