Fic: Of Thunderstorms and Nightmares

Jun 17, 2014 18:30

Title: Of Thunderstorms and Nightmares
Pairing: Ichiro/Shiro (Ohno/Nino)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4200
Warning: mentions of domestic violence, incest
Summary: His mother's love, his dad's strength, rainy days on the rooftop - all these things are parts of Ichiro's big puzzle of life. But sometimes there are pieces that don't quite fit, ones that ( Read more... )

ohno/nino, fic

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smile_arigatou June 17 2014, 21:04:02 UTC
That was really beautiful. The way you told it, with the abuse and how everybody is suffering and able to move on, it really made for a lovely story. Thank you for writing!

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morninglights June 18 2014, 21:02:10 UTC
Thank you for commenting, dear. I'm glad you could enjoy this story even with this rather dark setting :)

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lilisan31 June 17 2014, 21:11:28 UTC
Ohh.. Okay... I wonder if I have to say "Wonderful" or "Very sad"..
Then these two words are perfect for explain my thoughts !
Like Oh'chan said, he is pretty cowardly to be blind to the suffering of his brothers, but at his age he was not ready for so much responsibility.. Poor babies..
I wonder if the day of rain it's the day when they cry..
Thank you for sharing this beautiful but OOHHH SO sad story !
XOXO

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morninglights June 18 2014, 21:06:11 UTC
Thank you so much for leaving a comment :) And yes, Ohno had to shoulder way too much responsibility for his age, but sometimes life just leaves you struggling like that. The key is finding others to rely on and trust in, I guess. And that's what he found in Shiro in the end :)
I first planned the rainy days just being days in which Shiro wanted to run away from his life, but I like the thought that it's the days he may have been able to cry :) Thank you for that!

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br_arashi June 17 2014, 21:38:36 UTC
So sad but very beautiful in its on way.
Good thing he had Ichiro to hold to.
I just love this universe possibilities!!!

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morninglights June 18 2014, 21:08:31 UTC
Thank you for your comment :) I really like the universe and this may not have been the last fic I wrote about our dear Maiga brothers :D

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inachan89 October 6 2014, 18:54:22 UTC
Beautiful and sad at the same time,thanks for sharing=)

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morninglights October 23 2014, 21:09:51 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to comment :) I'm glad you liked it!

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