short fiction story

[moronic_rose]

Pushing the door open, Amanda slinked into the girls' bathroom. It had been a hard day; a hard week; an even worse year. She stood there, slouched in front of the dusty mirror, and stared at the face looking back at her. But, it wasn't Amanda's face that returned the gaze. Amanda was beautiful, with long curly blonde hair, and dashing crystal blue

Comments

[metallicat_79]

did you write that?? gave me chills, honestly!
But it's brilliant.

Cat

[moronic_rose]

yeah, i did... i may make a book of my poems and stories. not yet though. cant handle that yet. im glad you like it :o)