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morphiria

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Jul 10, 2005 17:32

Fandom: Full Metal Alchemist
Title: Mien
Rating: G, Romance
Pairing: Royai

( mien \MEEN\, noun; 1. Manner or bearing, especially as expressive of mood, attitude, or personality; demeanor. 2. Aspect; appearance )

royai, full metal alchemist

Comments 9

kuchenhexe July 10 2005, 14:26:00 UTC

Not a bad usage of second person. I normally don't care for that perspective, but you did a nice job with handling it.

And as others before me have said... Poor Roy. ;_; This was a good story. Angsty as hell, but good. ^_^

w175n57 July 10 2005, 14:31:44 UTC

♥♥♥ for using a word of the day and 2nd person pov!

all i can say(sadly) about the fic though, was that it was very well written and it pulled on my heartstrings. ^_^;; i've only read a few chapters of the manga, so whoever this pairing is, they sound lovely. but ♥! you = amazing.

morphiria July 11 2005, 05:07:00 UTC

^___^ I got the word of the day idea from you! ^o^ ♥♥♥ And for some reason I find 2nd person easier than 1st or 3rd person. >.> hm.

haha. this pairing is amazing, yes. :D you = more amazing than i could ever hope to be. ^_^; ♥

violent_aki July 10 2005, 23:00:08 UTC

Aww! So cute! I love Drunk!Roy who doesn't know where he is half the time. Love!