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mortal_words

To The Next "Him"

Nov 24, 2005 01:40

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heartmania November 27 2005, 01:45:46 UTC

I'm gonna be honest with ya, Lil. The first thing I thought when I saw this was 'Toxic' by Britney Spears (who's birthday is on the second of december!). But yours is better. And less danceable.Hmmm except it's somewhat reversed from the song...in the poem it seems that YOU are the quote unquote 'Toxic' one. Eenteresting.

heartmania November 27 2005, 01:45:53 UTC

I'm gonna be honest with ya, Lily. The first thing I thought when I saw this was 'Toxic' by Britney Spears (who's birthday is on the second of december!). But yours is better. And less danceable.Hmmm except it's somewhat reversed from the song...in the poem it seems that YOU are the quote unquote 'Toxic' one. Eenteresting.

heartmania November 27 2005, 01:46:20 UTC

hehe in the first one, I typed 'Lil.' But you're lily, not Lil.

heartmania November 27 2005, 05:13:13 UTC

Haha, plenty of people call me Lil, and you certainly have license to do so.

Hmm, funny, it never occurred to me to think of it like that...

umbrella4rain November 28 2005, 04:13:44 UTC

woah tahts weird, when i read it, i too noticed a musicy rhythm. i like. a lot. and can def. relate. a little too much. eeep

gege, i miss seeing u. but its good to talk to u when i do.

ah well. such is life, no?

~Raina