First work in a long time.

[mortal_words]

Crashing Down

You wear me out with your persistence
Make me question the existence
Of my fears till my resistance
Against inertia falls apart
I know not where this is going
My heart sways where wind is blowing
Poisonous, the line I’m toeing
Should I stop or should I start?

I am sick from how I feel

Comments

[heartmania]

I like the rhyming scheme. The 'apart' is at first different and surprising, but ends up working. And the choice of rhyming words was excellent as well.

keep on writing! you are truly talented.