Valentine's Fic Exchange: No Wonder I Fired You 2/2

[morthel]

 

Comments

[wiser_dachshund]

Very cute- gotta love that there was a ladder there the entire time!

*sigh*

Happy Valentines, Miranda...

[morthel]

That's the way my life always works, at least. There's always something you've overlooked. :)

[chilly_flame]

Wow. I loved it! Very unique way of bringing them together (I don't think falling down a hole has ever been done before!), and the dialogue and humor totally worked. Oh yeah, and the sex was delightfully hot too. Excellent job.

[morthel]

Thank you!

I just didn't want them trapped inside an elevator - it's so unoriginal, you know? :P

[tanama30]

loved it great story. enjoyed every minute of it. great job.

[morthel]

I'm glad you liked it!

:)

[gothic_pegusus]

I love this. Especially the ending:
(The million megawatt smile those words earned made Miranda’s breath catch, and she quickly added, “Now don’t read too much into this, Andrea.”
Andrea’s smile grew decidedly worrying in its intensity. “What, that you’re actually a…”
“Andrea, I believe there are better things you could do with that mouth of yours.”
“Like what? Because I’m pretty sure whatever you’re suggesting would make me a…”
“Oh, just shut it already.”)

Happy Valentine's Day Mirandy XD

Re: :)

[morthel]

Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[needled_ink1975]

This was great. Those last few lines of dialogue are smart and funny enough that I can't wipe the grin off my face. Great job!

Thanks!

(Nici)

PS- your cat and mine could be twins! (If it is your cat)

[morthel]

Wow, I've gotten comments! Yay! Thank you all very much.

Yes, that is indeed my cat. His name is Oskar.

[needled_ink1975]

You're welcome!

And my cat (Sox) is probably preening in that smug cat way because I made a pic of him my userpic. See? Practically twins.

Cheers!

-Nic

[morthel]

You're right! Although, yours looks much younger. Cute. ^^