The Bolts: Liberitas Ch. 02 * HP/DM * NC-17

[mortyys]

Title: The Bolts: Liberitas Chapter 02 - Miseria Cantare
Author: mortyys
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: The wonderful art by mayflo
Pairing: Draco/Harry
Disclaimer: Not mine! No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Summary: The boys of The Bolts are recording their first album, which tells the story of how Harry and Draco came

Comments

[mayflo]

OMG, beautiful!! You're so quick!! I can't believe ch.3 is on its way too *w00t*

I loved details like:
"tears streamed down Draco’s porcelain white cheeks as the song ended. The memories wouldn’t leave him alone."
This sentence really provided a beautiful imagery that made me want to draw it XD

The fact that Blaise was next to Draco was... brilliant! Also, that the pair of muggles Draco had to kill were gay lovers were a touch of ingenuity! Loved it! *luffs*

The branding of the tattoo was beautifully done!

"Just when the blackness of relief was upon him, the pain stopped. [...] It glowed bright red but was starting to blacken around the edges and in time would turn midnight black just like his father’s."

Gorgeous paragraph! Totally bewitching.

I can't wait to read "Silver and Cold" chapter. It's got to be my favouritest song among AFI's songs, I'm so looking forward to it XD

[mortyys]

Awww, this has to be the best FB I've ever recieved! Thank you!!

I'm lurking through ch. 3, i've never written a war scene and it posing it's problems, i have so much going on in my head and it just all wants to come out at once, lol! So i'm having to stop, regroup and start again... but it will be out by tomorrow!

I'm so glad you approve, I loved your pictures and CD and I want to do it justice.
<3leigh

[puppetslove]

OOOOOH damn that last line was something.
I think this is great!
Can't wait 4 more

[mortyys]

Chapter 3 is (finally!!) posted! Happy reading!

[mortyys]

Sorry for the wait! Chapter 3 is up! Happy reading!

<3 Leigh

[luttie]

I don't know what to say, I just can't stop thinking what will happen next! and when will I see the next chapter!

I think you bewitched me! I can't think of anything alse but this fic! LOL.

Anyway, Thank you so much for writing this and writing it so damn good!

[mortyys]

Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I just (FINALLY! LOL) posted the new chapter. Happy reading!