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[motel_chiina]

heres my poem. please dont laugh.

- when i see you i can feel my heart B R E A K. i thought you loved me, but you were just a fake. what were you thinking when you said i love you? what were you thinking when you said im sorry but we're thru? you [played] with my head, you screwed with my H E A R T, you started playing your games right from the [

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[melissasaurus]

wow. i honestly think that was really good. good job :).

[motel_chiina]

thanks...its sort of dumb though.

[losing_you_]

i like it. but i sware ive heard that somewhere. ....hmm not sure.

[motel_chiina]

haha, i didnt copy it from anywhere.

[xchickxxxflickx]

really cute i liek it a lot

[motel_chiina]

thanks. :D

[lostlover04]

OMG EMZ THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! its better than anything ive ever written.... you should enter it in a contest or something.... www.poetry.com i think

[motel_chiina]

haha. thanks rachel. its not that good though....

[lostlover04]

it seriously was.

[_supermouse_]

holy crap, that was soooooooo good, seroisly, i <3 it. ur soooo good at writing poems. <3

[motel_chiina]

thanks jessica.