I just have to say, you are making me fall more in love with Cook (like that could be possible) with every word of this that you write. I loved the image of the "tall, scruffy rocker with the kind eyes" cradling Archie in his arms, wiping Archie's tears away with the bottom of his tee-shirt, and guarding his bathroom door. Everyone should have a hero exactly like this. ♥
BF, thanks for commenting, and don't worry, there will be titillation a-plenty in the coming days.
Clio and Jehane, You guys are the very best. Thank you so much for commenting, and being so positive. I'm glad I was able to share the love effectively. Man, how I struggled with this chapter! I spent almost 9 straight hours re-writing it until the muses spoke. (In the process, doubling the length.)
(I guess the fervent invocations and beseeching worked)
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Star Trek tonight!
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But this was AMAZING!!!
Cook tucked this little bit of knowledge away into the growing file in his head entitled, The Mystery Of David Archuleta.
That line killed me! You have such a way with words, Mama!
Please don't make me wait too long for what happens next!
♥!
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And you are all so nice!
BF, thanks for commenting, and don't worry, there will be titillation a-plenty in the coming days.
Clio and Jehane, You guys are the very best. Thank you so much for commenting, and being so positive. I'm glad I was able to share the love effectively. Man, how I struggled with this chapter! I spent almost 9 straight hours re-writing it until the muses spoke. (In the process, doubling the length.)
(I guess the fervent invocations and beseeching worked)
Thanks Muses!
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