Oceanic Descent (Chapter Twelve)

[motherendurance]

 Ken Warwick paused and gathered himself before entering the security room where Jeff Archuleta was being held. He shot his cuffs, straightened himself and opened the door with as much assurance as he could muster.

Two beefy security guards were standing, and between them an enraged Jeff Archuleta was seated. He was wearing a slightly rumpled

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[clionona]

As Cook reached for the glory note, his face twisted up in an expression that could have been either anguish or exquisite pleasure.

OMG!!!

*iz dead*

That is the most perfect description of his "glory note" expression - ever.

As Cook allowed the last vibrant note to trail off, he moved towards David like a compass needle to true north.

YESSSSSSSSSS!!!

Mama, you're reigniting my love of Cookleta here, bb. Your beautiful words have set me on fire...

Cannot wait for more of this!!!

♥!

[motherendurance]

Clio bb, I just purely love you, I really really really do.

I really wasn't happy with this chapter, and you have made me feel SO much better! I will admit to watching that video... oh, about 20 times in a row, soaking it in. I think it's his absolute freaking hottest performance EVEH.

The EYES, the mouth, the freakin cheekbones, the total sincerity, the tiny lopsided grin, the total pornstar quality sexface...
(Le Sigh...)

No wonder Archie was overcome with lust, even if he didn't recognize the feeling... I was too!

Next chapter will be easier to write I think, I have a scene in my head that is so beautiful... I know I won't be able to put it on paper the way it is in my head, but I'm going to try.

Love you bb,
Mama E

[motherendurance]

BTW,

Leonard Cohen is a FREAKIN LYRICAL GOD!

Just had to add that.

<3

leonard cohen

[motherendurance]

Our synagogue does his music regularly.
We have a full band and wonderful voices.
Most Americans don't know his music.
I recently saw him perform while he was in LA.

Brenda Barrie or Renata's mom bbb

Re: leonard cohen

[motherendurance]

I totally remember going to see him at the concert hall, I don't think I was more the 13 or 14. He's AMAZING;~)
Lucky lucky you!

I LOVE that you are commenting! (and blushing a bit that you heard me cackle!)

Love you,
Renata, AKA bbb's daughter

PS. Jehane's in SE Asia, Clionona's in SW USA, and both are cooler then cool, yes? Too cool to not know Leonard Cohen for sure.

PPS. And ALL OF YOU have better weather!

PPPS. We have been colder then Siberia 3 days in a row now! It SNOWED... AGAIN... in MARCH!
Grrrr...

[jehane_writes]

Leonard Cohen song, SO AMAZING. Love him! Must have listened to Famous Blue Raincoat a zillion times.

The Jeff section, bb, was difficult for me to read, and I can only imagine how hard it was for you to write. But you know it needs to be addressed in the context of this powerful story. I'm afraid for you as well as Lupe, but I know how strong both of you will be.

And, I will agree wholeheartedly with you that Hello was Cook's absolute freaking hottest performance. I dig his freaky redhead, his beautiful skin, the way his lips caressed the mic - AND YES, he DID make the "pornstar quality sexface"!!

Poor Archie, overcome with LUST! (which he thinks lives in his chest and lower torso, heeee!)

*fans self* - nope, not working this time, damn it! - *runs to take a cold shower*

[motherendurance]

I would take a cold shower too... but it's too cold to get naked in here! Maybe I'll just take off my sweater for a minute... or maybe my shawl. Should cool me down fast!

Okay bbs, I admit it. I AM IN LOVE WITH DAVID COOK!

<<<333
Renata

[jehane_writes]

And I'm sure it feels FINE. :)

[motherendurance]

Can we just do a real crone's cackle here together.

That FINE is so salaciously yummy, it really makes me want to wink, cackle, leer, and call young bucks "sonny"!