Oceanic Descent (Chapter Fourteen)
Oceanic Descent - Chapter Fourteen
Cook woke to the feeling of Michael shaking his shoulder gently. Cracking one eyelid open briefly, he saw that the sky was just lightening. Groaning in displeasure at the early hour, Cook tried to bury himself under his blankets.
Unpleasantly, he found all of his blankets being briskly pulled away.
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And I kind of am in love with your Michael, too - the conversation Cook and Johns had at the beginning was important (but kind of hilarious!) and very much IC. "Either that kid is possessed or crazy, or maybe I'm crazy" - indeed, Michael darling ;)
I hope you enjoyed writing this half as much as I enjoyed reading, bb. This part seemed easy, effortless.
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Oh it was fun to write too, that's for sure! I LOVE writing Cook and Johns SO MUCH! In fact, I just had the distinct pleasure of watching BF read the chapter and he was laughing out loud... ok snickering, with little mutters, repeating some of the funny bits.
That's after he pointed out that yes, baby could be over-used and inspired me to go back and mix it up a bit! He gives great feedback ;~P
I am kind of loving Michael myself, foul-mouthed, warmhearted Aussie that he is!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it dearest!
Love,
Renata
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Oh man, you totally made my day with this comment and I LOVE YOU!!!!
(I turned Trenee onto Cookleta!!!!!)
Pardon me while I do my little *happy dance*!!!
Actually, it's only fair. I have neither read nor watched twilight, and I was introduced to the fandom by YOU and you aWESOME story!!! (I actually decided not to see it till after your story is done for fear of messing up my totally enjoyable HP/Twilight experience on your universe!)
THANK YOU so much for coming and reading, and like it, and taking the time to tell me too sweetie!
~Mama E.
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