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Birthday poem akselavshalom July 30 2013, 22:31:39 UTC
To a guy known as Mothy

*ah-uh-huh-HERM*
Dear Mothy van Cleer
I don't know you
If I said differently
it wouldn't be true

You were born the 31st
Ten days from me
Then you wrote on my LiveJournal, of posts the first
Makes me feel like I owe you (of sorts) a fee

So on your special day
(from me, to you)
A lame-ass poem
Poorly rhymed, too

A poem that is, at best
A structural mess
No more, no less
*sigh* Every day is a test

Anyway, dude,
I hope you're in a good mood
'Cause based on what you've has to say
You're probably a-okay

You're able to formulate yourself
Far more eloquent than me
Whenever I comment on something
It's the equivalent of "lol-smiley-heehee"

Now my arsenal is running dry
So to end this properly
A silent salute
And a half-way rhyme from Nor...way

...
Seriously, man, happy birthday.

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Re: Birthday poem mothy_van_cleer July 31 2013, 04:51:09 UTC
Oh, if there was ever a more obvious sign that you weren't a native Anglophone...

Thank you so much.

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