[poem] Informalities - [Gravi]

May 26, 2010 23:57

Title: Informalities
Author: motley_sis
Genre: acrostic argument   (read down the bold letters).
Rating: G     Warnings: Whimsy. Oh, and adultery.
Notes: Gravitation belongs to the Murakami woman, not the Motley one. But you know that.  Also posted here.

For ederyn.   Don't tell Mika.

Informalities )

char: seguchi tohma, fandom: gravitation, * acrostic, char: uesugi eiri, # dedication/gift

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ederyn May 26 2010, 23:16:11 UTC
That's why I can't get anywhere with my acrostic poem...because you have all the acrostical genes! Waaaaaaah! But yayz that you've written what I wanted to write! Only mine never would have been this fantastisch. Are you a Tohma/Eiri fangirl? Or do you have some other fave pairing? Or none at all? I guess I love Tohma and Eiri together the bestest, followed by Tohma and K, then Tohma and various others. So why did you post these here and not at the comm? They're truly awsum! And I'm not just saying that. You've never had any appreciation for your own talents. *makes Tohma push you in front of a car until you do*

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motley_sis May 27 2010, 03:02:28 UTC
Yesh! I ate all your acrostic-savvy genes before writing that.  (^w^)   Too bad they still haven't helped me write that sestina. But thanks! I haven't put it up at the comm because... well, I have no reason. Other than being honoured to be pushed into traffic by Touma, of course.

Haven't decided what sort of dragonmonsterfangirl I'll be, really, but I'm all for Eiri and Touma. Don't believe reading the manga could change that. There's too much delicious opportunity for angst between them for me to ignore.  '-(°w°)-'   Since AIM I have been wondering about Noriko's loaded husband, though, and that Seguchi gourmet meal gone to waste. I'm thinking a bunch more Gravi-acrostics should follow.

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ederyn May 27 2010, 04:25:43 UTC
Yayz! I demand more! I also demand that you link to this at the comm unless you can come up with a decent reason not to, so there. Oooh yesh, I love Tohma and Eiri together because of their shared tragic past. Hadn't thought much about Noriko and her hubby, but yesh there's definitely a story there. Probably very little about them together in the manga, too, but I'm still downloading the billion pages that comprise it. Grrrrr! Now you must write an acrostic about Eiri ruining Tohma's haute cuisine! *waits and waits for it*

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motley_sis May 29 2010, 04:27:14 UTC
All right! My head totally hurts from thinking now and I still have no reason, so I give up.  c[_]T_T )

Haven't written that acrostic about Eiri ruining Tohma's cuisine as yet, but I did  make an avatar.  *flaunts it*   Hee!

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motley_sis May 27 2010, 02:43:44 UTC
Oh! Sorry, Dibbler.  (^.^;)\

It's koibito - It's something that Shuichi-Eiri's actual lover in Gravitation-desperately wants Eiri to say to him... heh.

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glenavera May 27 2010, 18:41:01 UTC
Ederyn's right. You really should post those at the comm. I've never read an acrostic poem before and I'm still not sure what it is but I liked them! I liked them a lot and I really hope you consider to post them at the comm.

I'm even giving you cookies!

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motley_sis May 29 2010, 05:10:54 UTC
Thank you!  (^-^)[_]3 - Posted a link to these at the comm, because I couldn't think of a reason not to after all, and cannot resist cookies.

Ah! Just the other day I showed my Mutti some of the acrostics I've written thus far. She'd never heard of them either. No idea how I ever came to the idea of writing these silly things, but the acrostic form has existed for a long time. Heh. Even the Dutch national anthem is one (first letter of each verse spells out 'Willem van Nassov'). ^^;

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glenavera May 29 2010, 15:14:56 UTC
Thank you for those articles, especially the information about your national anthem is very insteresting. Now I finally know what acrostic means^^

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motley_sis May 29 2010, 15:36:02 UTC
You're welcome! And feel free to write your own.  (^_~)[_]3

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ruavain May 29 2010, 05:01:28 UTC
Just lovely! &hearts

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motley_sis May 29 2010, 05:12:20 UTC
Thank you!  ♥

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ederyn May 29 2010, 05:51:55 UTC
Btw, I love your new icons! Totally schitterend! *goes for real now*

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motley_sis May 29 2010, 06:21:38 UTC
Thanks!  (^-^)[_]3   Heh. These comment sections are becoming more and more confusing every time I visit them.  *stops spamming now*

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