Stay, PG, Ben/Richard

[motorcyclesfly]

This is the first thing I've written in ages. Perhaps it is a disjointed, confusing mess and should have been deleted. I can't promise quality, unfortunately, nor even quantity really as it's less than two thousand words, but hey, it's got Richard and Ben in it

Comments

[mr_henry_gale]

Brilliant. You have absolutely no reason to doubt yourself. Not disjointed or confusing at all - it flows well, and the descriptions are lovely and evocative. It's got quality and quantity, really - I'd be hard-pressed to write a thousand words, let alone two.

You did a good job with this. :-)

[motorcyclesfly]

Aw, thank you very much. :) I'm glad you liked it and it wasn't terrible. That emotional Richard really got to me, and Ben being sad and dejected.

[mr_henry_gale]

I don't think anything you write could ever be terrible. :-)

Emotional Richard had the misfortune of having to share screentime with quite a few instances of Jackface. Sad and dejected Ben, though... oh, he's just heartbreaking and lovely.

[motorcyclesfly]

Ah, thank you so much! :)

[ilaydanur]

This was so good, I loved it. Not disjointed or confusing. You're a very talented writer.
You wrote them both very well.

[motorcyclesfly]

Oh, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)