(I missed something: "Sylar rested his palms on Mohinder’s hips, a familiar signal when this began at the door. Mohinder placed his hands upon Sylar’s shoulders and the braced his weight there, giving a light leap of his legs to reach Sylar’s waist." *facepalm* Sorry.)
May have been a mistake I made when editing. :) Sharp eyes, though! ^_^ Man! <3 Thanks! You know, I almost forgot to post this? I've watched about five hours straight of Battlestar Gallactica...
No, I checked the copy I have--I missed it. I think it was because I spent a couple of minutes figuring out what you meant by the first sentence I quoted there. Overthink one thing, miss another. ^_^
Five hours, eh? Nice. I just spent about that long playing cards with my family. For some reason, my parents want to spend time with my brother and I while we're in the country. Pfft. Don't they know I have fanfic to deal with? =p
hehe! Fanfic priorities! ^_~ My mom asked me what I was writing while I was home, and I explained the whole Pushing Daisies/Heroes bit, and she was so amused she made me let her read the first narration. She thought it was hilarious. ^_^ I totally have long discussions about fanfic with her (she's known that I write slash for years). We spent a good long while on the way to the airport discussing when sex is and is not appropriate to write explicitly in stories. I told her a few horror stories of badfic I've read- we had some great laughs. ^_^
Yes. 'Tis true. I love the smut. But this, this is a work of art, darling! God, your descriptions in this kill me. It's so beautifully done. I bow before your skill. You know how to tell a story, that's for damn sure. And be it something that not only gives me a wonderful dose of smut, it is also incredibly emotional and intimate. All things that I love - porn for porn sake while fun, nowhere near pushes all my buttons like something like this.
Something soulful, and elegant. You capture Mohinder's pain so well in this, his need to disappear, to become lost in something other than the hurt, and helplessness he feels. Having him give that kind of trust to Sylar is wonderful, and the care and feeling that Sylar displays is beautiful.
What a wonderful gift! Thank you so much. This was amazing. You're amazing.
I'm glad to see more of your beautiful fic in the world! *loves*
You know, this didstart out as a PWP for you, and then I *did* think about just how hardcore it would push your buttons to have the tragic angst in there. ^_~ That totally crossed my mind. I'm happy it had the desired effect. :D Knowing how well you yourself write these kinds of broken and spiritually beaten characters... well I knew it had to be the fic for you. ^_^ The complexity of their relationship can so easily become far more complex, and I think that's the real time when their potential as a couple can shine.
I'm thrilled that you loved this- I only wish that the new school quarter wasn't starting! It'll be back to just the original work during my few spare hours... But I'm happy I got to put out some more mylar for you during the holidays. ^_^ Thanks for the lovely comments, as always! *hug*
There is no way to say "thank you" that would be adequate. This is absolutely wonderful! Not only did you take the prompt to a level I had hoped for but never imagined, but the icing on top was the background plot you rooted it all to. I love you for all of this
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Thanks so much! The angst has always been what these two thrive on in fic, but I love to use it to heighten what could have been PWP smut and make it more meaningful. :) Thanks for reading and commenting!
*hugs you and this fic around the waist and NEVER LETS GO*
I am both heartbroken and titillated, which I suppose was the desired effect. I MISS YOU STOP STUDYING JAPANESE AND WATCHING BATTLESTAR AND WRITE MYLAR FOREVER.
That is the best thing I've seen in 2009. Remy is indeed valiantly fending off Japan, and I admire his courage in the face of OMFG CYLON (is that what they look like? I thought they were all that hot blonde chick!). But HOW SMUG do Mohinder and Sylar look back there! I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU.
Oh, some of them are hot blonde chicks. Others are more old school models. ;) I think that Mohinder and Sylar look quietly confused up there... and Remy's pretty sad his ass is going to get beat. No Sebastian to save him... D:
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(I missed something: "Sylar rested his palms on Mohinder’s hips, a familiar signal when this began at the door. Mohinder placed his hands upon Sylar’s shoulders and the braced his weight there, giving a light leap of his legs to reach Sylar’s waist." *facepalm* Sorry.)
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Five hours, eh? Nice. I just spent about that long playing cards with my family. For some reason, my parents want to spend time with my brother and I while we're in the country. Pfft. Don't they know I have fanfic to deal with? =p
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Yes. 'Tis true. I love the smut. But this, this is a work of art, darling!
God, your descriptions in this kill me. It's so beautifully done. I bow before your skill. You know how to tell a story, that's for damn sure. And be it something that not only gives me a wonderful dose of smut, it is also incredibly emotional and intimate. All things that I love - porn for porn sake while fun, nowhere near pushes all my buttons like something like this.
Something soulful, and elegant. You capture Mohinder's pain so well in this, his need to disappear, to become lost in something other than the hurt, and helplessness he feels.
Having him give that kind of trust to Sylar is wonderful, and the care and feeling that Sylar displays is beautiful.
What a wonderful gift! Thank you so much. This was amazing. You're amazing.
I'm glad to see more of your beautiful fic in the world! *loves*
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I'm thrilled that you loved this- I only wish that the new school quarter wasn't starting! It'll be back to just the original work during my few spare hours... But I'm happy I got to put out some more mylar for you during the holidays. ^_^ Thanks for the lovely comments, as always! *hug*
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I am both heartbroken and titillated, which I suppose was the desired effect. I MISS YOU STOP STUDYING JAPANESE AND WATCHING BATTLESTAR AND WRITE MYLAR FOREVER.
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On a side note, Remy only has one arm.
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