You written it nicely, having many perspectives of a single person it must be hard to re-tell. Have I ever told you that you're awesome? Because you are :D
also.. I can't stop laughing at "butterfly with onion/celery grew on its head", Sensei's imagination gone wild!
Thank you so much for doing this. It's an interesting short story :D
You're making me blush :)) Thank you! I really hope some kind soul makes a full translation, but it's great if my re-telling helps a little, too... This story is definitely crazy and fun~
Well, both people are speaking and thinking in turn: one phrase from the older guy's perspective, the next phrase from the boy's, then the older guy again, etc. Kind of... like a camera changing angles in a movie. Each of them is a 'camera', in a way, commenting the same progressing situation from different standpoints.
In "Pink to Gray", half of the chapters were showing River-chan/Daiki's view on the story, then the other half was mostly showing the same things from Gocchi/Rengo's point of view. In "Ore-sama" we can have 'real-time' experience, two POVs at the same time :)
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also.. I can't stop laughing at "butterfly with onion/celery grew on its head", Sensei's imagination gone wild!
Thank you so much for doing this.
It's an interesting short story :D
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Thanks again dear >3<
This is a story that sensei said about time leap he wrote?
This is amazing story
I like it
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Always thank you for the summary.
I'm a little bit interest with this story,
Like pink n gray the story just like have back and forth plot but in different way?
Am i wrong XP
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In "Pink to Gray", half of the chapters were showing River-chan/Daiki's view on the story, then the other half was mostly showing the same things from Gocchi/Rengo's point of view. In "Ore-sama" we can have 'real-time' experience, two POVs at the same time :)
Sorry, I suck at explaining T^T
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