[ONESHOT] Linoleum Tiles

[mountainmadman]

“Good lord.”

“I know, right?”

“How did he die?”

“Suicide. Jumped out of his window.”

“We’ll need a family member to verify his identity.”

“His parents are gone. Perhaps a close friend?”

“That would work. As long as they can sign the papers.”

“Let’s put him in the deep freeze. We wouldn’t want anyone to see his rotting corpse.”

“Your mind is…something else

Comments

[eddisontrent]

Dude, what the hell? From a writer's point of view, it's frightenly well written and I really like (dark-humour-wise) the characters of the two police officers, but as a Yongseo fan who just got his heart ripped out - DUDE, WTH??? (But really, style-wise, it's brilliant. ;) You rule at witty conversations.)

Best regards,
Trent.

[bollywoodrecord]

This is... creepy. In a good way, of course, but creepy, nonetheless. What did you do to him?!? I'm guessing we're supposed to come up with it ourselves... Well, my mind is being very disturbingly creative right now. XD Thanks for writing.

[hongaerin]

Oh, that is, eh... well... Honnestly, I'm not sure I understood everything. I guess I got most of it, or the general concept, but it's still confusing. I think you made it to be confusing, but that added to the facts that my English is too awful to read through the lines, that I'm maybe not very subtle, and moreover that I'm blond (true disadvantage, eh), I'm confused. Yep. Really confused.
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But thank you for writing it. I guess? I'll just... uh... pretend that I never imagined an image of a dead Yong with blood everywhere. Ugh.

[melibu7]

LOL! this is really a weird one shot but well written. i get the whole point of really not saying their names so that it wont totally freak yourselves out more. dead yong.... hmmmm, he must have felt very bad to go to that stage.

LOL i wrote one too that is kinda creepy and twisted. it's actually quite fun to hint but yet to not totally reveal the whole mystery of it.

[melibu7]

i am guessing you were watching either csi or criminal minds when you thought of this...LOL

[looby_1]

M3, this is not as bad as you make it sound. When I saw your post on Soompi, I thought this is going to be heartbreaking but surprisingly, it's not. Well-written as usual. Images of CSI comes to mind :)