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sue_ur_wok October 4 2009, 09:37:08 UTC
I second what everyone else has said. And uh no I totally don't play favourites. :L I do have something very... slight to nitpick, in terms of have you actually roleplay. I've noticed that at times you have a tendency to simply "react" rather than write in addition something that progresses a scene. If that makes any sense?

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mounties_rock October 4 2009, 19:53:33 UTC
No! Please, this is the kind of stuff I'm looking for! Actually, I... noticed that I do that too, I just.. can't think of how to fix it, I guess I'm worried about taking to many liberties with the scene or something? I don't know or I can't think of something to do, er. Like, is it okay to have reaction and just add a little on the end or should I just be only adding, or... I don't know.

BLAH BLAH BLAH WHAT I MEAN TO SAY IS: I'm trying to work on it, do you have any advice?

favorites :L ?

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sue_ur_wok October 5 2009, 01:37:57 UTC
DUDE LOOKING BACK ON THIS I JUST REALISED I ACTUALLY DIDN'T MAKE SENSE. NOTICE THE ENGRISH. WHAT THE FUCK, BEAU. XD HAVE=HOW, SOMEHOW.

Sometimes if it's not like something major I don't even bother writing a reaction. I sort of just take whatever was last said and build off on it, so I guess it makes it moar linear story... Er, talking out of my arse. Anyway, when in doubt GO FOR THE LULZ and yeah man take liberties!. It's okay to write reactions though, but maybe try to think of dialogue for someone to work off on instead of putting another player (or players) in the position of having to lead the scene.

Scenario: Matt gets badtouched.
Response: (insert MOEBLUSH and CANADAFAGGING)
OR
Response: (insert MOEBLUSH and CANADAFAGGING) HEY DON'T TOUCH ME T-THEREEEE!

IDK shit like that.

:L

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YOUR ENGRISH IS FINE CHINA MAN. mounties_rock October 6 2009, 02:04:24 UTC
Okay, it may not look like it but that really helps me out. Is saying something enough of a response for the person to build off of.. or? If you notice anything else like that, please tell me, I super mean it. SUPER.

:L MY GUN IS BIGGER

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13_foundations October 5 2009, 02:46:30 UTC
Heya Bro~

I think you're amazing and adorable and so fitting for Mattie so keep up the good work and post more often! I love having our bro muses interact!

On that note, lets have more hanging out time and feel free to fulfill the passive aggressive quota everyone's demanding on me~ I kind of ask for it.

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mounties_rock October 6 2009, 02:34:30 UTC
IF YOU INSIST, PREPARE TO BE BITCHED AT. Just don't go.. yandere on me or anything...

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