(love)drunk

Aug 24, 2011 18:18

(love)drunk
pg13, jongyu, romance
i always say how i don't need you,
but it's always gonna come right back to this, please, don't leave me.
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pairing: jonghyun/onew, shinee, !romance, !fanfic, rating: pg-13

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Comments 27

volatileflame August 24 2011, 23:35:06 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ ;^; <3

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mountpurple August 25 2011, 03:29:58 UTC
sdfsdjlf thank you for reading ;A;

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jarnscye August 25 2011, 00:20:42 UTC
oh, ;___;♥
Number one (in his heart, his world).
this was such a lovely fic, and i don't know what to say ):
but i really liked how you gave such a strong insight to a drunk jonghyun who is so obviously in love with with jinki that it hurts so much, and he's drunk and he's in love, and he's desperate, and he's sad ):
it really seemed so realistic, and paying for a hug, oh why do you make my heart feel sad, too. :| but then it's really cute, too, and just beautiful and
"I finally found you," Jinki smiles that wonderful, blinding smile that Jonghyun loves so so so much.
oh so sweet.

also, the ending was just all sorts of adorable, and the last line perfect.
i really like your writing. ):

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mountpurple August 25 2011, 03:33:30 UTC
oh you stawp it
im glad tht you got the feeling i was trying to instill into the fic ^_^
desperate!jjong makes me feel so dsfjsldkjf
thank you so much! tht rly means a lot to me sobsu ;_;

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rawfudge August 25 2011, 00:40:39 UTC
asf;klajgniwu desperate!jjong is the most heartbreaking yet cutest thing ever. I just want to take him into my arms and just tell him it's okay ;~; even though I wouldn't be as good as Onew ofc.

Jonghyun points to himself, then to the messily drawn heart on the car window, and then to Jinki.

"So, so, so, so much," Jonghyun adds before he closes his eyes and drifts off the sleep, leaving Jinki to watch the traffic light turn green, alone.
that part. just. d'awwwwwwwww ;________;

I loved this! Definitely going to add it to my recs on my fic journal :D

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mountpurple August 25 2011, 03:34:18 UTC
IKR, I LOVE DESPERATE!JJONG.
sfjlds thank you!
im hnoured \o/

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potaoto August 25 2011, 01:26:35 UTC
Jonghyun points to himself, then to the messily drawn heart on the car window, and then to Jinki.

"So, so, so, so much," Jonghyun adds before he closes his eyes and drifts off the sleep, leaving Jinki to watch the traffic light turn green, alone.
oh ;^;

hi i like this and i like you ):

also, l o l All he can see are stocking-clad legs and a pink glittery skirt before he reaches into his wallet, pulling out bills and throwing it at the girl's feet.
The girl with blonde hair picks up all the bills
dies is this supposed to be female!taemin kjfgsdkl

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mountpurple August 25 2011, 03:35:40 UTC
hi i like this comment and i like you :> WHY IS THT A SAD FACE.
thank you for reading!

omfg, someone noticed it jajajaja

SHE WONT EVER GET ENOUGH ONCE SHE GETS A LITTLE TOUCH
sobsu i love taemin

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potaoto August 25 2011, 03:41:03 UTC
BECAUSE. YOU'RE AMAZING AND I'M SADFACE cries idk idk

taemin is a huge tease ): once i read pink glittery skirt i was like "omg taemin!?!?!" orz

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mountpurple August 25 2011, 03:57:46 UTC
dskfjsl stop it ^///^
i know i crey

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voltagequeen August 25 2011, 05:35:05 UTC
This is so adorable!! It warmed my icy heart tbh.

mem-ing!

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mountpurple August 27 2011, 17:41:54 UTC
thank you for reading! :>

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