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It was hard not to stumble - he skidded, but did not fall. Just kept running. Ripper pounded down behind him. The fox did not look back, did not know how close he was. He just kept fleeing. There were many dark corridors and the boy paid no heed to them. He didn’t know his way around, but that didn’t matter to him. As long as he kept in motion, the

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[unreal_magic]

Instant awesome! I love this little teaser. Makes me want to read more.

[dr_sipp]

Thanx <3 <3 mwahahah~ I'm glad. :D

[sam_cc]

You have to be one of the only people who can write Tails in a way that make him interesting to me (the other person being Ian Flynn, because regardless of what the fans say I loved Tails's role in the recent issues). You really show him as being a real person, with fears and worry, not a tag-along sidekick.

There's questions I'm interested to hear answered now - but that's what a good preview is for. Mainly I'm wondering about Ripper, as I'm not familiar with him, and who it is that Tails is carrying.

Also its a shame Silver Sonic doesn't turn up more because your version made him seem intriguing.

[dr_sipp]

Thanx <3 I'm glad. Shax Davis writes him REALLY well :3. Of course Shax writes about everything really well. <3

Ripper was mentioned in chapter 1 >.> <.< Also, he's carring Eliza. that's all I'll say.

It is D: he's such a fun character. Between his crush on RK and his insane playfulness... kukuku. I'll make full use of the screentime he gets, though, make no mistake <3

[sam_cc]

I'll take your word for it. ^^; Haven't seriously read Sonic fanfics for a long while, just from what I remember not many people made Tails interesting for me.

In that case I probably need to reread chapter one at some point. :P

Crush on RK? :O That's news to me. XD

[dr_sipp]

Well if you ever get the urge to read some good fanfiction that is Sonic, check him out 8D

MAYBE.

Is it? I mentioned it in the KatC meme :3 well, NOW YOU KNOW.

Delayed comment ftw :D